<details style="color:gray;background-color: #f8f8f8;padding: 8px;border-radius: 4px;" open> <summary> Thinking... </summary>**Evaluating the Brief**
I've just finished the first step, understanding the task. It's a reply to Jim about introducing Chinese literature. It involves crafting an engaging activity. I see this requires a blend of cultural understanding and English writing skills. I'm now moving on to the content brainstorming phase.
**Refining the Approach**
I'm now fully immersed in the prompt analysis. It's a suggestion letter to Jim about introducing Chinese literature. I've broken it down into format, style, and person. I've considered the email structure: opening, body (suggestions with reasons), and closing. The style should be friendly but formal. I'm also considering tenses: present for general suggestions and future for anticipated outcomes.
**Crafting the Structure**
The prompt is now clearly defined; an email with a friendly-formal tone, offering activity suggestions for Jim's Chinese literature event. The outline is taking shape, focusing on an introduction acknowledging Jim, a body with 2-3 detailed suggestions and a closing expressing future willingness. I am now deep in the process of generating those activity suggestions and their supporting rationale, keeping in mind the audience of a high school reading week. I intend to use information decomposition to come up with ideas.
**Refining the Suggestions**
I'm now fully immersed in the core content generation, focusing on those 2-3 detailed activity suggestions. The first idea involves a Chinese Calligraphy Workshop. I'm brainstorming the specifics: materials, initial instructions, and the expected learning outcomes for students. I'm also considering a Chinese Traditional Clothing Presentation. I'll need to research suitable traditional attire and develop an engaging narrative for a short presentation on the historical and cultural background. Lastly, I am also developing a third suggestion, Chinese Tea Tasting. I am now in the stage of building out the content of these suggestions.
**Generating Further Ideas**
Now I'm focusing on the first activity: a themed book exhibition. I'm exploring different categorization strategies, like dynasties or genres, and considering how the exhibition could offer a visual introduction to Chinese literature. I'm also now analyzing the best ways to incorporate the reasoning behind the suggestions, as well as the anticipated student outcomes.
**Generating Activities**
I'm now fully immersed in the core content generation, focusing on those 2-3 detailed activity suggestions. I've broken down the prompt: "I've broken down the prompt into sections and created a plan to start writing the email." Next, I'm thinking about generating a third idea. I'm focusing on those 2-3 detailed activity suggestions. First I considered a "Themed Book Exhibition", and second, a Chinese Calligraphy Workshop. I am now in the stage of building out the content of these suggestions.
**Analyzing the Suggestions**
I've been immersed in refining the activity ideas for Jim's event. My focus is now on the content specifics for those 2-3 suggestions. I am building out content for the exhibition, workshops, and traditional presentations. The next step is a deep dive into the specifics of these suggestions.
**Formulating Suggestions**
I'm now deep in the process of formulating activity suggestions, breaking down the email prompt. I've focused on creating a clear outline for the email format, including an introduction, body (with activity suggestions), and closing. I am now in the stage of building out the content of these suggestions.
I am breaking down the prompt, and I'm generating activity suggestions for Jim's event. I'm focusing on the email structure: opening, body, and closing. The content is now the main focus. I'm using the structure, person, tense, and style described previously to guide me. I am now deep in the process of generating these activity suggestions.
**Structuring the Suggestions**
Now, I'm analyzing the provided prompt and formulating activity suggestions for Jim's event. I'm focusing on the email structure: opening, body, and closing, employing the outlined style and tense. Currently, I'm deep in the process of generating those activity suggestions.
**Formulating the Email**
I'm now fully immersed in developing the email content, focusing on those 2-3 detailed activity suggestions for Jim's event. I've broken down the prompt: "I've broken down the prompt into sections and created a plan to start writing the email." I will now proceed to craft a clear outline and generate the content.
**Formulating the Email**
I'm now fully immersed in developing the email content, focusing on those 2-3 detailed activity suggestions for Jim's event. The email structure is set: an opening, body with suggestions, and a closing. I'm focusing on crafting engaging activity descriptions, including Chinese Calligraphy and a Themed Book Exhibition, keeping in mind the reading week audience. I am now in the stage of building out the content of these suggestions.
**Structuring the Response**
I've been immersed in outlining the email's structure, focusing on the friendly yet formal tone for Jim. I'm deep into crafting engaging suggestions, keeping in mind the reading week context. The aim is to create detailed, actionable ideas.
**Generating Draft Suggestions**
I've just finished the framework and am now creating initial activity suggestions. I've broken down the prompt: "I've broken down the prompt into sections and created a plan to start writing the email." I am now in the stage of building out the content of these suggestions.
**Structuring the Reply**
My current focus is on crafting the core content, selecting activities, and preparing detailed content. I'm building out a thematic book exhibition and an interactive workshop. My aim is a balanced structure: opening, body with suggestions, and a closing. I'm working to include engaging and actionable descriptions.
**Developing Activity Ideas**
I'm now deep in the process of formulating those activity suggestions, considering the structure for each email section, while also building out a themed book exhibition and an interactive workshop.
**Developing Activity Concepts**
I've just finalized the comprehensive outline, complete with detailed examples for each email section, keeping in mind the reading week context. My main focus now is on creating activity suggestions. I'm building out both the content and activities in the email.
**Generating an Approach**
I've just finalized the comprehensive outline, complete with detailed examples for each email section. Now I will synthesize the collected material, and start constructing my initial suggestions, ensuring a clear and informative tone.
I am now building out both the content and activities in the email.
**Analyzing the Prompt**
I've just finished the comprehensive analysis. It's a suggestion letter about introducing Chinese literature. I am structuring the information into an organized format. This will enhance the overall flow and clarity of the message. I'm focusing on crafting a proper structure for the email.
**Developing the Outline**
I've just finished the comprehensive analysis. It's a suggestion letter about introducing Chinese literature. I'm focusing on crafting a proper structure for the email. I've begun creating detailed examples for each section.
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好的，作为中国教育考试院认证的阅卷专家，我将严格按照您的要求，完成这项关于给外国好友Jim回复邮件提供“介绍中国文学”活动建议的任务。
**第一步：审题列提纲**
**1.1 文体格式结构→** 建议信（邮件）；**语言风格→** 友好、热情、提出建议的建设性语气；**人称→** 第一人称 (I, my) 代表李华，第二人称 (you, your) 指代Jim；**时态→** 一般现在时（表达观点和建议），将来时（描述活动预期效果），现在进行时/现在完成时（提及Jim学校正在进行的活动）。
* **理由：**
* **文体：** 题目要求“请你用英文给他回复”，属于典型的邮件回复，内容为提供建议，故为建议信。
* **语言风格：** 双方是好友关系，因此语言应亲切自然，同时建议内容需要清晰、中肯。
* **人称：** 以李华的身份给Jim写信，自然使用第一人称；称呼Jim用第二人称。
* **时态：** 描述普遍性建议和当前想法用一般现在时 (e.g., "I think you could...")；提及Jim正在进行的活动可用现在进行时 ("Your school is holding...")或现在完成时；展望活动效果用将来时 (e.g., "This will make the event more successful.")。
**1.2 信息提取**
* **1.21 核心信息：**
1. 活动形式 (Suggestions for activity formats)
2. 活动内容 (Suggestions for activity content)
* **1.22 隐藏信息：**
1. Jim 希望活动能够吸引同学并成功举办。
2. 活动应能有效地帮助外国学生了解和欣赏中国文学。
3. 建议需要具有可行性和趣味性。
4. 李华作为中国学生，能够提供地道且有价值的建议。
**1.3 对1.2中信息整合优化：**
文章结构为：开篇点明收到邮件并乐于提供帮助 → 分别就“活动形式”和“活动内容”提出具体建议，并阐述理由或预期效果 → 结尾表达美好祝愿和进一步帮助的意愿。
**1.5 布局谋篇**
（注意：此处“话题词汇”为该段落/思路中可能涉及的核心词汇，具体范文选词会更精准。）
**第一段: （背景交代+过渡，引出建议）**
* **背景交代：** 得知Jim的计划并表示赞赏。
* **过渡衔接：** 表明乐意提供建议。
* **→话题词汇：** `reading week`, `Chinese literature`, `event`, `suggestions`, `excited`, `glad`
* **示例1→** **It’s fantastic to hear** your school **is hosting** a reading week and **that you’re planning** an event **to introduce** Chinese literature; I’m **delighted to offer** some ideas **that might spark** some inspiration. (*(背景描述法 + 具体内容描述法；核心语法结构：It is adj. to do + that引导的宾语从句 + V-ing作伴随状语 + that引导的定语从句；翻译：得知你的学校正在举办阅读周，并且你正计划一个介绍中国文学的活动，这真是太棒了；我很高兴能提供一些或许能激发灵感的想法。)*)
* **示例2→** **Receiving your email about** organizing an event on Chinese literature for your school’s reading week **truly excited me**, and I’ve **come up with** a couple of suggestions **which I hope you’ll find helpful**. (*(背景描述法 + 具体内容描述法；核心语法结构：V-ing短语作主语 + which引导的定语从句；翻译：收到你关于为学校阅读周组织中国文学活动的邮件让我非常兴奋，我想出了一些建议，希望你会觉得有帮助。)*)
* **示例3→** I **was thrilled to learn about** your initiative **to showcase** Chinese literature, and **as you asked for** suggestions, I’ve **given it some thought** and **would love to share** what I believe could make your event engaging. (*(背景描述法 + 具体内容描述法；核心语法结构：as引导的原因状语从句 + what引导的宾语从句；翻译：我很高兴了解到你展示中国文学的创举，既然你征求建议，我已经认真思考过，并乐于分享我认为能使你的活动引人入胜的内容。)*)
**第二段（主体段：实质内容+拓展支撑，建议活动形式和内容）**
* **分解思路1：推荐多样化的活动形式，增强吸引力。** (条理分解法 + 具体列举+描述法)
* **→话题词汇：** `format`, `exhibition`, `display`, `workshop`, `salon`, `interactive`, `engaging`
* **示例1→** For the activity format, **you could set up** an **engaging exhibition** **featuring** translated classics and modern works, **perhaps categorizing them** by genre or theme **to give** a broad overview. (*(具体列举+描述法；核心语法结构：情态动词表建议 + V-ing作伴随状语 (featuring, categorizing) + 不定式作目的状语；翻译：关于活动形式，你可以设立一个引人入胜的展览，展示翻译的经典著作和现代作品，或许可以按体裁或主题分类，以便提供一个概览。)*)
* **示例2→** **How about organizing** a "Chinese Literature Corner" **where** students **can browse** through illustrated storybooks or even try some calligraphy **related to** famous literary quotes? This **would surely create** a more immersive experience. (*(具体列举+描述法 + 意义功能展望法；核心语法结构："How about V-ing"表建议 + where引导的定语从句 + 过去分词短语作后置定语；翻译：组织一个“中国文学角”怎么样？在那里学生们可以浏览插图故事书，甚至尝试一些与著名文学引言相关的书法。这肯定会创造一种更具沉浸感的体验。)*)
* **示例3→** **Another appealing format might be** a series of short, dynamic presentations or even a mini-drama performance **based on** excerpts from well-known Chinese stories, **which would certainly capture** everyone's attention. (*(具体列举+描述法 + 意义功能展望法；核心语法结构：might be表建议 + 过去分词短语作后置定语 (based on) + which引导的非限制性定语从句；翻译：另一种吸引人的形式可能是一系列简短而富有活力的演示，甚至是基于著名中国故事节选的迷你戏剧表演，这无疑会吸引大家的注意力。)*)
* **分解思路2：充实活动内容，增强互动性和深度。** (分拆内容叙述法 + 意义功能展望法)
* **→话题词汇：** `content`, `discussion`, `sharing`, `storytelling`, `film`, `authors`, `themes`
* **示例1→** Regarding content, **you could incorporate** interactive sessions like a book-sharing salon **where** participants **discuss** their favorite Chinese literary pieces, **fostering** a deeper understanding and connection. (*(分拆内容叙述法；核心语法结构：情态动词表建议 + where引导的定语从句 + V-ing作结果状语；翻译：关于内容，你可以加入互动环节，比如读书分享沙龙，参与者可以讨论他们最喜欢的中国文学作品，从而培养更深的理解和联系。)*)
* **示例2→** **To make the content more vivid**, **consider hosting** a storytelling session focusing on famous myths or folk tales, or even screening short film adaptations of literary works, **followed by** a brief discussion. (*(分拆内容叙述法 + 意义功能展望法；核心语法结构：不定式作目的状语 + V-ing短语作宾语 + 过去分词短语作伴随状语；翻译：为了使内容更生动，可以考虑举办一个以著名神话或民间故事为主题的故事会，或者放映文学作品的短片改编版，然后进行简短讨论。)*)
* **示例3→** **It would also be wonderful to invite** someone **who is knowledgeable about** Chinese literature, perhaps a teacher or a cultural enthusiast, **to give** a brief talk on influential authors or significant literary movements, **thereby enriching** the participants' perspectives. (*(分拆内容叙述法 + 意义功能展望法；核心语法结构：It would be adj. to do + who引导的定语从句 + 不定式作目的状语 + V-ing作结果状语；翻译：邀请一位精通中国文学的人士，比如老师或文化爱好者，进行关于有影响力的作家或重要文学运动的简短演讲，也会非常棒，这样可以丰富参与者的视角。)*)
**第三段（结语段）→ 表达祝愿+提供后续帮助**
* **归纳总结：** 希望建议有帮助。
* **积极展望/承诺：** 祝活动成功，并表示乐意提供进一步帮助。
* **→话题词汇：** `hope`, `helpful`, `successful`, `support`, `further assistance`, `looking forward`
* **示例1→** I **sincerely hope** these initial thoughts **are helpful** for your planning, and **please feel free to ask if** you **need any more** specific ideas or resources. (*(经验、惯例引入法；核心语法结构：宾语从句 + if引导的条件状语从句；翻译：我真心希望这些初步的想法对你的策划有所帮助，如果你需要更多具体的点子或资源，请随时问我。)*)
* **示例2→** **May these suggestions contribute to** a wonderfully successful Chinese literature event! I’m **always here if** you **want to brainstorm** more. (*(意义功能展望法；核心语法结构："May..."开头的祝愿句 + if引导的条件状语从句；翻译：愿这些建议能促成一个非常成功的中国文学活动！如果你想进行更多头脑风暴，我随时都在。)*)
* **示例3→** **Wishing you the very best** with your event! **Don't hesitate to reach out should you require** any further input from my side. (*(经验、惯例引入法；核心语法结构：V-ing短语表祝愿 + 倒装的条件状语从句 (should you require)；翻译：祝你的活动一切顺利！如果需要我这边提供任何进一步的意见，请尽管开口。)*)
**1.4 新课标主题语境→** 人与社会（文学、艺术与体育）→ **子话题：** 2.21 小说、戏剧、诗歌、传记、文学简史、经典演讲、文学名著等 → **教材链接：**
* **译林B2U4 Exploring literature** (文学、书籍、名著、文学体裁)
* **外研B2U4 Stage and screen** → *Television or books?* (议论文：电视、书籍、媒介优缺点)
* **人教XB3U5 Poems** (中英文诗歌赏析)
**维度四：核心英文话题词汇**
* **Words (10):**
1. literature (文学)
2. suggestion (建议)
3. activity (活动)
4. introduce (介绍)
5. culture (文化)
6. exhibition (展览)
7. workshop (工作坊/研讨会)
8. interactive (互动的)
9. theme (主题)
10. share (分享)
* **Phrases (10):**
1. reading week (阅读周)
2. Chinese literature (中国文学)
3. activity format (活动形式)
4. literary works (文学作品)
5. guest speaker (演讲嘉宾)
6. book display (书籍展示)
7. storytelling session (故事会)
8. film adaptation (电影改编版)
9. cultural exchange (文化交流)
10. delve into (深入探究)
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**任务二：打造并升级参考范文**
**第一步：打造参考范文**
Dear Jim,
***It’s great to hear*** **about** your school's reading week and your plan **to introduce** Chinese literature! I'm **happy to offer** some suggestions **that I hope will be useful**. (段落功能：背景交代+写信目的，引出话题；信息分解方法：背景描述法)
For activity forms, **you could consider** a **book display** showcasing various Chinese literary works, or an **interactive workshop** where students **can discuss** famous stories or authors. As for content, **introducing** classic tales like "Journey to the West," or **sharing** poems from the Tang Dynasty **could be very engaging**, **allowing** students **to appreciate** the charm of our culture. (段落功能：建议主体段，提供活动形式和内容的具体建议；信息分解方法：具体列举+描述法，分拆内容叙述法)
I **truly hope** these ideas help you **organize** a successful event. **Let me know if** you need more help! (段落功能：归纳总结句，表达祝愿和提供进一步帮助的意愿；信息分解方法：经验、惯例引入法)
Yours,
Li Hua
(109 words)
**第二步：满分范文升级**
Dear Jim,
***It’s fantastic to hear*** your school **is hosting** a reading week and **that you’re planning** an event **to introduce** Chinese literature! I’m **thrilled to share** some ideas **that might prove valuable**. (段落功能：背景交代句+过渡句，更热情地回应并引出建议；信息分解方法：背景描述法)
Regarding forms, **how about organizing** a **vibrant exhibition** of Chinese literary masterpieces, perhaps categorized by genre, **to offer** a glimpse into their diversity? ***Additionally***, an **interactive salon**, **where** participants **can share** interpretations of famous works or **explore** captivating authors like Lu Xun, **would surely foster** deeper engagement. For content, **you could feature** storytelling sessions of beloved folk tales or even screen short film adaptations, **making** the learning experience both **enjoyable and insightful**. (段落功能：实质内容段，提出两种具体的活动形式并充实内容细节，增强互动性和吸引力；信息分解方法：具体列举+描述法，分拆内容叙述法)
I **sincerely wish** these suggestions **contribute to** an **unforgettable** event. ***Should you need*** **any further assistance**, please **don’t hesitate to ask**. (段落功能：归纳总结句，表达更美好的祝愿并主动提供进一步支持；信息分解方法：意义功能展望法，经验、惯例引入法)
Yours,
Li Hua
(118 words | 蓝思值评估：约850L-950L | CEFR评估: B1+ 至 B2- | 话题词汇密度较高)
**批注：**
* **高级语法结构运用：**
* 第一段：`It's fantastic to hear...that...` (感叹句型及宾语从句)；`that might prove valuable` (定语从句)。
* 第二段：`How about organizing...?` (建议句型)；`perhaps categorized by genre` (过去分词作状语)；`to offer a glimpse...` (不定式作目的状语)；`where participants can share...or explore...` (where引导的定语从句，含并列动词)；`would surely foster...` (情态动词表确定推测)；`you could feature...` (情态动词表建议)；`making the learning experience...` (现在分词作结果状语)。
* 第三段：`Should you need...` (虚拟语气条件句的倒装)。
* **信息分解方式：**
* 第一段：背景描述法 (引入Jim的计划)。
* 第二段：具体列举+描述法 (建议展览和沙龙的形式)；分拆内容叙述法 (阐述展览和沙龙的具体内容，如分类、讨论鲁迅、民间故事、电影改编)。
* 第三段：意义功能展望法 (祝愿活动难忘)；经验、惯例引入法 (主动提供帮助)。
* **词汇和句式升级亮点（对比第一步范文）：**
* `great to hear` → `fantastic to hear`
* `happy to offer` → `thrilled to share`
* `useful` → `valuable`
* `book display` → `vibrant exhibition of Chinese literary masterpieces`
* `interactive workshop` → `interactive salon`
* `discuss famous stories or authors` → `share interpretations of famous works or explore captivating authors like Lu Xun`
* `introducing classic tales...or sharing poems` → `feature storytelling sessions of beloved folk tales or even screen short film adaptations`
* `allowing students to appreciate the charm` → `making the learning experience both enjoyable and insightful`
* `truly hope these ideas help you organize a successful event` → `sincerely wish these suggestions contribute to an unforgettable event`
* `Let me know if you need more help` → `Should you need any further assistance, please don’t hesitate to ask`
* 增加了连接词如 `Additionally`。
* 句式更加丰富，如 `How about organizing...?` 和倒装句 `Should you need...`。