参考范文一:
Unexpectedly, she found Kris sitting in front of the door, with a notebook in his mouth.Swelling with confusion/A sense of confusion taking hold of her, Mrs. Lee couldn't help asking "Why are you here, Kris?”. Suddenly, the dog-ear in the notebook attracted her attention. Hardly had she noticed it when she took the notebook and quickly opened it, only to find a message from Jack, reading, "Mum, come to me! I am in a shaft in the pasture. Kris can take you to find me!'' Half overjoyed and half anxious, Mrs. Lee gestured Kris to lead the way. Seeming to understand her and wagging his tail wildly, Kris turned around and ran forward fast. Mrs. Lee following him closely, it wasn't a longtime before they rushed to the shaft of the pasture where Jack was alive and well. How glad Jack was when his mother caught him in her arms and lift him out!
Successfully rescued,Jack explained to Mum how he came up with the idea. After he and Kris both fell into the shaft, he tried to calm himself down and think of how to get out. The moment he touched the notebook in his pocket, a good idea occurred to him. He took it out, wrote down the dog-eared the page and said to Kris, "Kris, I will help you out first! Remember you have to go home and give the notebook to Mum!'' Then he bent down,lifted the dog up with all his strength, raised himself upon tiptoe and helped him out. Kris, being a smart and obedient dog understood Jack's message and raced to get help. Having heard this, Mrs. Lee was amazed at her son's resourcefulness and thanked Kris for his bravery and loyalty. From that day on, Jack and Kris became inseparable, sharing a special bond forged through this unforgettable experience.
参考范文二:
Unexpectedly, she found Kris sitting in front of the door, with a notebook in his mouth. Overwhelmed with confusion, Mrs. Lee couldn't help asking, "Why are you here, Kris?" Suddenly, a prominent dog-ear on the notebook caught her eye. Hardly had she noticed it than she snatched the notebook and quickly opened it, only to find a message from Jack scribbled inside, reading, "Mum, come to me! I am in a shaft in the pasture. Kris can take you to find me!" A mixture of relief and dread washed over her. Mrs. Lee urgently motioned for Kris to lead the way. Seeming to understand, Kris wagged his tail wildly, spun around and sprinted forward. Mrs. Lee following him closely, they raced towards the pasture, her heart pounding, until they reached the shaft where Jack was found safe and sound.
Successfully rescued, Jack explained to Mum how he came up with the idea. After they both fell into the shaft, Jack took a deep breath, trying to calm himself and think of a way out. The moment his hand brushed against the notebook in his pocket, inspiration struck. He pulled it out, quickly scribbled a note on the dog-eared page, and said to Kris, "Kris, I'll help you out first! Remember, take this notebook home to Mum!" Then, with a surge of strength, he bent down, lifted Kris up, and strained on tiptoe to hoist him out of the shaft. Kris, the smart and loyal companion, seemed to understand Jack's message and dashed off to get help. Having heard the full account, Mrs. Lee was overwhelmed by her son's resourcefulness and Kris's bravery, lavishing thanks upon them both. From that day on, their bond, forged in the depths of the shaft, became unbreakable, a testament to courage, loyalty, and the extraordinary connection between a boy and his dog.