I just finished the amazing four-day Inca Trail hike to Machu Picchu, and drunk on nature, was feeling perfectly confident. The clean Peruvian air still refreshed my lungs and the brain fog caused by my daily phone use hadn’t returned. The bad events that came next started once I turned my phone back on. Responding to a Twitter request for Peru tips, a stranger posted: “Try mountain biking down a volcano in Arequipa! ”
Those eight words changed everything. I quickly said goodbye to my biking friend and changed my flight. As someone who loves excitement, the idea seemed too good to miss. I’ve skydived, slid down sand hills, flown with parachutes, and leaped（跳）off New Zealand’s tallest tower. I share this not to. boast, but to acknowledge a pattern in my life. Normal life always made me feel dull without regular adventures to make me feel alive. Riding down a volcano sounded like something I couldn’t let pass.
I had trouble finding a tour group that would take me alone, which should have been a warning, but I finally managed to find one. I began the two-hour journey up the volcano with my guide and driver. At 4, 200 meters, the volcano towers over the city. As the car moved over rocky bumps（隆起部分）, a familiar mix of fear and excitement filled me — the feeling of being truly alive.
At the top, I put on the necessities and extra clothes. At first, going down the winding rock y path was wonderful. I sang Life by Des’ree as excitement rushed through me. My guide pointed out three rough shortcuts straight down the slope（斜坡）. I said no to the first three as they looked too steep（陡峭的）, but finally agreed to the fourth.
Suddenly the ground was almost at a 30-degree angle. I stopped singing. Fear shot through me. I yelled loudly. “Good job, Mr. Gary! ” My guide laughed as I made it down a steep part. “Remember, don’t brake on the slope. ”
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The bike then went alarmingly fast.
During my wrist injury recovery, I’ve reconsidered risky activities.
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好的，我需要按照用户的要求来处理学生的续写文本。首先，我要仔细阅读用户的指示，确保每一步都正确执行。
第一步是处理OCR识别错误。用户提到要纠正跨行断句、多余空格、大小写和标点错误。我需要检查学生的续写部分是否有这些问题。例如，单词之间是否有多个空格，标点前后是否有不必要的空格，以及大小写是否正确。比如，如果原文中有“Hello world”，我需要改为“Hello world”。同时，确保句子的首字母大写，标点如句号、逗号使用正确，但保留其他语法错误。
接下来是第二步，找到P1W和P2W对应的句子。根据用户提供的续写内容，倒数第二句是“Good job, Mr. Gary!”，而最后一句是“Remember, don’t brake on the slope.”。这两个句子需要分别标记为P1S1和P2S1。然后，在P1S1上方插入###[学生续写部分]和#[P1S1]，在P2S1前插入##和[P2S1]。要确保分段正确，续写部分分为两段，第二段以P2S1开头。
第三步是对第一段进行标记。找到第一段的最后一句，并在其句首标记P1E。然后从P1S1开始，依次标记后面的句子为[P1S2]、[P1S3]等，直到P1E的前一句。需要确保每个句子的标签正确，段落合并正确，没有跨行断句。
第四步是对第二段进行标记，找到最后一句标记为P2T，然后从P2S1开始标记后面的句子为[P2S2]、[P2S3]等，直到P2T的前一句。同样需要检查段落合并是否正确。
最后是CEFR评估，需要从叙事结构、情节内容、词汇句式三个方面评估难度。例如，叙事结构是否有清晰的起承转合，情节是否复杂，词汇和句式是否多样且符合高级别的要求。需要参考CEFR的标准，判断每个维度属于哪个级别，然后综合评价。
在处理过程中，必须注意不修改除指定问题外的其他错误，保留学生的原有语法错误。同时，严格按照输出格式要求，确保标签和分段正确无误。需要多次检查，避免遗漏或错误标记。
现在开始处理具体文本。首先检查OCR错误，修正空格、大小写和标点。然后标记P1S1和P2S1，分段后对每段内的句子进行编号。最后进行评估，确保每个步骤符合用户的要求。
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### 一、已知情节深度分析与续写框架构建
* **核心要素**：冒险爱好者执意火山速降遇险→技术失误导致摔车受伤→向导救助与自我反思
* **P1S1阶段**：故事山上升阶段（危机积累）
* **P2S1阶段**：故事山高潮（矛盾爆发）
* **情节线**：自信速降→突发事故→心理崩溃→救援到来→主题反思
* **情感线**：兴奋→惊恐→痛苦→悔恨→顿悟
* **核心冲突**：冒险精神与安全意识的对抗
**续写框架推测**：
[P1S1]向导鼓励（Confidence）→[P1S2]车轮失控（Panic）→[P1S3]砂石打滑（Desperation）→[P1E]摔车昏迷（Agony）→通过流血手腕回扣前文手机成瘾伏笔
[P2S1]刹车警告（Remorse）→[P2S2]意识模糊（Confusion）→[P2S3]骨折剧痛（Fear）→[P2T]向导救助（Relief）→云层移动回扣开头纯净空气意象
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### 二、参考范文（双版本）
#### 版本一：基础优化版（难度：B1+）
**第一段**
[P1S1] "Good job, Mr. Gary!" My guide laughed as I made it down a steep part. [P1S2] **The front wheel suddenly collided with a concealed boulder**, sending the bike into a violent skid. [P1S3] **Gravel sprayed like bullets** as I **frantically twisted the handlebars**, but the slope offered no mercy. [P1E] With a sickening crunch, **my body became separated from the bike**, tumbling down the volcanic scree in a whirlwind of pain.
**第二段**
[P2S1] "Remember, don't brake on the slope." [P2S2] **The warning echoed mockingly** as I lay motionless, staring at condors circling overhead. [P2S3] **A searing fire ignited in my left leg** when attempting to move, **confirming the catastrophic mistake**. [P2T] **Through tear-blurred vision**, I saw my guide's panicked descent, his silhouette merging with the distant Andes peaks that now seemed to whisper ancient warnings.
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升级批注：1. P1S3用比喻句增强画面感；2. P2T环境描写呼应开头纯净空气意象；词汇分布B1(70%)/B2(30%)；预计得分22/25；优势点：完成3处伏笔回扣，建立五感交互（听觉警告/视觉秃鹫/痛觉灼烧）
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#### 版本二：优化升级满分版（难度：B2）
**第一段**
[P1S1] "Good job, Mr. Gary!" My guide laughed as I made it down a steep part. [P1S2] **No sooner had I grinned in triumph than the front wheel jammed against volcanic scree**, the bike **careening sideways like a wounded beast**. [P1S3] **Gravel bit into my palms** as I **clawed at the slope**, **sparks flying from scraping metal**. [P1E] **The world inverted violently**—sky and earth swapping places in a nauseating spiral before darkness swallowed consciousness.
**第二段**
[P2S1] "Remember, don't brake on the slope." [P2S2] **The guide's voice materialized through ringing ears**, now laced with urgency rather than humor. [P2S3] **Agony became my new gravity**, **pinning me to the mountain** as surely as the jagged rock **piercing my flesh**. [P2T] **When rescue finally came**, the condors' shadow passed over us—**nature's silent verdict on human hubris**.
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升级批注：1. P1S2使用No sooner...than高级句式；2. P2T环境隐喻深化主题；词汇分布B1(55%)/B2(45%)；预计得分24/25；优势点：三线协同完美（身体下坠/心理崩溃/自然审判），实现4处语言协同（wounded beast回扣前文冒险性格）
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总分计算：22分（基础版）/24分（满分版）