第一步:审题列提纲
1.1 文体格式结构:建议信;语言风格:友好、真诚、建设性;人称:第一人称和第二人称;时态:一般现在时(表达观点和建议)、将来时(展望行动或效果)。
1.2 信息提取
1.21 核心信息:给Jim的校报栏目 "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" 投稿提供建议,包括建议内容和理由。
1.22 隐藏信息:建议的内容应具有全球视野,并能体现青年的积极作用和行动力;理由应有说服力,能够帮助Jim理解建议的价值。
1.3 对1.2中信息整合优化:
文章结构为:感谢来信并回应请求 → 提出具体投稿建议(聚焦一个全球挑战及青年行动)→ 阐述选择该建议的理由(与栏目主题契合、展现青年力量、具启发性)。
1.4 布局谋篇
**第一段: (背景交代 + 过渡)**
* 背景交代:感谢Jim的邮件,提及他为 "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" 栏目准备投稿。
* 过渡衔接:表示乐意提供建议。
* →话题词汇:**contributing to**, **column**, **suggestions**, **ideas**
* **示例1:** ***It's great to hear you're contributing*** to the "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" column, and I'd be ***delighted to offer some suggestions***. (<em>背景描述法+明确目的;翻译: 很高兴听说你要为“全球挑战与青年行动”栏目投稿,我很乐意提供一些建议。</em>)
* **示例2:** ***Thanks for reaching out*** about your article for "Global Challenges and Youth Actions"; I've ***given it some thought*** and have an idea ***that might be helpful***. (<em>背景描述法+引出下文;翻译: 感谢你为“全球挑战与青年行动”栏目的文章征求我的意见;我思考了一下,有一个或许有用的想法。</em>)
* **示例3:** I'm ***thrilled*** you're writing for "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" and ***happy to share my thoughts*** on a potential topic. (<em>背景描述法+表达情感;翻译: 我很高兴你要为“全球挑战与青年行动”栏目写作,也很乐意分享我对一个潜在主题的看法。</em>)
**第二段: (建议内容 + 理由)**
* 建议投稿内容:聚焦青年在应对某一具体全球挑战(如环境保护、气候变化、教育公平等)方面的创新行动和积极影响。
* 理由:
1. 与栏目主题 "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" 高度相关。
2. 能生动展现青年的创造力、责任感和实际行动。
3. 内容具有启发性,能鼓励更多青年参与。
* →话题词汇:**focus on**, **tackle**, **innovative ways**, **environmental protection**, **climate change**, **youth-led initiatives**, **raise awareness**, **make a difference**, **relevant to**, **showcase**, **inspire**
* **示例1:** ***I'd suggest focusing on*** how young people are **tackling climate change** through **innovative local projects**. *(建议内容:具体列举法;拓展思路:青年行动的具体化;核心语法结构:宾语从句)* This topic is not only **highly relevant** to "Global Challenges" but also **perfectly showcases** "Youth Actions" as it allows you to explore **creative solutions initiated by peers**. *(理由1: 相关性 + 青年行动的体现;条理分解法;核心语法结构:not only...but also..., as引导原因状语从句)* ***Furthermore,*** stories of youth **making a tangible difference** can truly **inspire your readers**. *(理由2: 启发性;意义功能展望法;核心语法结构:动名词作主语)*
(<em>我建议重点关注年轻人如何通过创新的本地项目来应对气候变化。这个主题不仅与“全球挑战”高度相关,而且完美地展示了“青年行动”,因为它能让你探讨同龄人发起的创造性解决方案。此外,年轻人做出切实改变的故事能够真正激励你的读者。</em>)
* **示例2:** ***Perhaps you could write about*** youth involvement in **promoting sustainable practices** within their communities, **highlighting** their efforts to **reduce waste or conserve energy**. *(建议内容:具体列举法+分词作伴随状语;拓展思路:可持续发展行动;核心语法结构:情态动词+动词原形,现在分词短语)* **The reason I recommend this is twofold:** firstly, sustainability is a **critical global issue**, and secondly, it provides a **concrete example** of how young individuals can **actively contribute to positive change**. *(理由:条理分解法 + 意义功能展望法;核心语法结构:表语从句,how引导的宾语从句)*
(<em>或许你可以写写青年参与在社区内推广可持续实践的情况,突出他们为减少浪费或节约能源所做的努力。我推荐这个主题的理由有两点:首先,可持续性是一个关键的全球问题;其次,它提供了一个具体的例子,说明年轻人如何能够积极为积极的改变做出贡献。</em>)
* **示例3:** ***Considering the column's theme, you might explore*** the role of youth in **raising awareness about plastic pollution** and their campaigns to **reduce its impact on local ecosystems**. *(建议内容:具体列举法;拓展思路:特定环保问题;核心语法结构:动名词短语,不定式作定语)* **This is a significant challenge globally**, and detailing youth-driven solutions **would effectively illustrate** the "Youth Actions" component, **demonstrating their commitment and creativity**. *(理由1: 全球挑战 + 青年行动的展示 + 结果状语;条理分解法;核心语法结构:and连接的并列句,现在分词作结果状语)*
(<em>考虑到栏目的主题,你可以探讨青年在提高对塑料污染的认识以及他们为减少其对当地生态系统影响所开展的活动方面的作用。这是一个全球性的重大挑战,详细描述青年驱动的解决方案将有效地阐释“青年行动”的组成部分,展示他们的承诺和创造力。</em>)
**第三段: (祝愿 - 已给出)**
* 归纳总结:重申建议的价值或再次表达良好祝愿。
* →话题词汇:**helpful**, **contribution**, **good luck**
* (此段内容已由题目给定,无需再设计示例)
1.5 新课标主题语境→人与社会(社会服务与人际沟通 / 环境保护)→子话题:2.12 公益事业与志愿服务 / 3.21 自然环境、自然遗产保护 →教材链接:**人教版 (PEP) XB3U3 Environmental Protection** (气候变化、水污染、浪费、空气污染、沙漠绿洲、环境问题报道) 或 **外研版 (New FLTRP) B3U2 Making a Difference** (公益精神、人物传记).
1.6 核心英文话题词汇:
* 单词:
1. **challenge** (挑战)
2. **action** (行动)
3. **global** (全球的)
4. **youth** (青年)
5. **suggest** (建议)
6. **topic** (主题)
7. **reason** (理由)
8. **inspire** (激励)
9. **article** (文章)
10. **column** (栏目)
* 短语:
1. **global challenges** (全球挑战)
2. **youth actions** (青年行动)
3. **environmental protection** (环境保护)
4. **climate change** (气候变化)
5. **raise awareness** (提高意识)
6. **make a difference** (做出改变)
7. **focus on** (专注于)
8. **take part in** (参与)
9. **contribute to** (为...做贡献;投稿)
10. **in my opinion** (在我看来)
### 任务二:打造并升级参考范文
## 第一步:打造参考范文
Dear Jim,
***I'm glad to hear*** you're **preparing** an article for the "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" column. ***It's a fantastic idea!*** I'd be **happy to offer** a suggestion. (<em>段落功能: 背景交代+过渡;信息分解方法: 背景描述法,引出建议</em>)
***Perhaps you could focus on*** how young people are **actively involved in tackling** plastic pollution. **For instance,** you could **describe** youth-led initiatives like **organizing community clean-ups** or **promoting reusable alternatives.** This topic **directly relates to** "Global Challenges," as plastic pollution is a **pressing issue**, and it **effectively showcases** "Youth Actions" by highlighting **their concrete efforts.** ***Moreover,*** such stories can **truly inspire other young people to act.** (<em>段落功能: 建议主体段;信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法 (建议内容和具体例子) + 条理分解法 & 意义功能展望法 (阐述理由及其效果)</em>)
Hope my suggestions are helpful. Good luck with your contribution!
Yours,
Li Hua
(102 words | 蓝思值: 约850L | CEFR: B1 | 话题词汇密度: 较高)
## 第二步:满分范文升级
Dear Jim,
***It's truly great*** you're **crafting** an article for the "Global Challenges and Youth Actions" column. ***Regarding your request for ideas,*** I've **got a suggestion that might resonate.** (<em>段落功能: 背景交代+过渡;信息分解方法: 背景描述法,使用更生动的动词和表达方式回应请求并引出建议;升级词汇:glad to hear → It's truly great, preparing → crafting, happy to offer a suggestion → Regarding your request for ideas, I've got a suggestion that might resonate</em>)
***I'd strongly recommend centering your piece on*** the **innovative ways** youth are **addressing food waste**, a **significant global concern.** **You could delve into** how they **initiate educational campaigns** in schools or **develop creative solutions** like community composting projects. This approach not only **perfectly captures** the essence of "Global Challenges" by tackling a **critical issue**, but also **vividly illustrates** "Youth Actions" through **concrete examples of their proactive engagement.** ***Furthermore,*** **such narratives of empowerment often serve as a powerful catalyst, motivating peers to join these vital efforts.** (<em>段落功能: 建议主体段;信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法 (提出更具体的建议主题“粮食浪费”及青年行动的具体形式) + 条理分解法 & 意义功能展望法 (深入阐述理由,强调与栏目主题的契合度及青年行动的展现力和启发性);升级词汇和句式:Perhaps you could focus on → I'd strongly recommend centering your piece on; actively involved in tackling plastic pollution → innovative ways youth are addressing food waste, a significant global concern; For instance, you could describe youth-led initiatives like organizing community clean-ups or promoting reusable alternatives → You could delve into how they initiate educational campaigns in schools or develop creative solutions like community composting projects; directly relates to "Global Challenges," as plastic pollution is a pressing issue, and it effectively showcases "Youth Actions" by highlighting their concrete efforts → This approach not only perfectly captures the essence of "Global Challenges" by tackling a critical issue, but also vividly illustrates "Youth Actions" through concrete examples of their proactive engagement; Moreover, such stories can truly inspire other young people to act → Furthermore, such narratives of empowerment often serve as a powerful catalyst, motivating peers to join these vital efforts.</em>)
Hope my suggestions are helpful. Good luck with your contribution!
Yours,
Li Hua
(110 words | 蓝思值: 约920L | CEFR: B1+ | 话题词汇密度: 非常高)
**语法结构及信息分解方式批注:**
* 第一段:使用了 "It's + adj + (that) clause" 结构;"Regarding..."介词短语作状语引出话题;"that might resonate" 定语从句。信息分解:背景描述法。
* 第二段:使用了 "I'd strongly recommend + V-ing" 提出建议;"a significant global concern" 同位语;"how they initiate..." 宾语从句; "not only...but also..." 并列连词结构;"by tackling..." 介词短语作方式状语;"V-ing (motivating)..." 现在分词作结果状语。信息分解:具体列举+描述法 (建议内容和行动),条理分解法 (理由1:与全球挑战相关),意义功能展望法 (理由2:展现青年行动,理由3:启发激励作用)。