2023吉林一模-Ittleby Fein《指纹化蝶破阴云，共绘彩虹见真情》

When things went wrong, Ittleby Fein always had something nice to say. When Dad forgot about the pizza and it burned, Ittleby comforted him by saying it would still taste good. And he was right. The pizza edges were dark and crispy, but the middle wasn’t half bad. When Ittleby’s friend David got a low score on the spelling test, Ittleby said that he would do better next time. And, sure enough, David studied hard and got 100 percent the next week. When his teacher, Mr D, bumped into a bookstand in the library, Ittleby told him not to worry as Mrs Bog wouldn’t be upset. He was right. The librarian just laughed and helped pick up the books. Ittleby looked on the bright side. And everyone liked that about him. Everyone, that is, except Hazel. Hazel was the new kid in the class. On her first day, Ittleby said, “Nice to meet you, Hazel. I think you’ll like it here.” Hazel stared at him. “I doubt it.” Ittleby didn’t know what to do. He’d never met anyone like Hazel. When Mr D said they’d have recess inside because of the rain, Ittleby said, “Every cloud has a silver lining.” “A silver lining?” Hazel shook her head. “Clouds are white. Maybe gray. Where do you get this stuff?” Ittleby felt as if the wind had been knocked out of him. Outside the window, the clouds had rolled over the sun. The room felt darker. “Bad things come in threes,” said Hazel. No outdoor recess is number one. What will the second thing be? The class didn’t have to wait long to find out. Greta was carrying a tray of paints during art class. She tripped, and the paint went flying. There was blue on the floor and red and black on the walls. Hazel declared it to be the second bad thing. Ittleby didn’t know what to say. Hazel seemed so sure about the Rule of Three Bad Things. Emma came to look at Ittleby’s painting. “It’s beautiful. I especially like the grassland.” She said. 注意： 1、续写词数应为150左右; 2、请按如下格式作答。 She picked it up, not realizing she had paint on her fingers._____________________________________ “Want to add one?” Ittleby asked Hazel.______________________

参考范文一： She picked it up, not realizing she had paint on her fingers. The fingerprint lay quietly on the painting, seeming to support Hazel’s Rule of Three Bad Things. Hazel pointed, “Ittleby’s picture is messed up! There’s number three.” Upset, Emma apologized to Ittleby with her face blushing with shame. Ittleby comforted her with a pat on the shoulder and stared at the print for a while. Suddenly, with his eyes lit up, he dipped his finger into the yellow paint and added two more prints onto the painting. Now, together with Emma’s, they looked like three colorful butterflies flying above the green grassland. “Want to add one?” Ittleby asked Hazel. Hazel thought about it. “It will be fun.” Ittleby encouraged her. “How strange!”, thought Hazel, hesitantly dipped her finger into the print. Gently pressing it onto Ittleby’s painting, she carefully added wings. “It looks great,” said Ittleby. Outside, the sky happened to clear up, casting golden bright light on the field of butterflies. Looking into each other’s eyes, Hazel and Ittleby laughed together merrily. Ittleby said to Hazel, “Forget your Rule of Three Bad Things. Although bad things happen, good things happen, too. And sometimes, there were good things hiding where they didn’t expect them.” 参考范文二 邢颖: P1: Emma picked up the painting, not realizing she had paints on her fingers.P1是一个事件，衔接可以是事件结果（作品被弄脏了）+反应（吃惊）A sudden gasp echoed through the classroom as Fein's beautiful grassland was smeared with red and blue fingerprints. (结果+同学们的反应) "Oh no…" Emma whispered, her voice trembling slightly. “I didn't mean to…”（Emma的反应） Hazel folded her arms with a knowing smirk, clearly counting this as the third bad thing. (Hazel的反应) Fein blinked in surprise, but almost instantly, a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth. "It's okay, Emma," he said warmly. （Fein的反应）"Actually, you've made it even better." Picking up a brush, he added a few light strokes and gradually shaped the random fingerprints into red and blue wildflowers. （Fein的应对方法） 邢颖: P2："Want to add your fingerprint on the painting?" Fein asked Hazel.衔接用Hazel的反应 (惊讶)Hazel looked surprised, clearly not expecting such an invitation.用动作链展开 Hesitating for a while and encouraged by Fein's warm gaze, she slowly dipped her finger into the paint and pressed it onto the canvas. 动作后加结果（影响）As she stepped back and saw her print blending into the field of flowers, a genuine smile lit up her face. She turned to Fein and said softly, "Maybe you're right about clouds having silver linings."套句升华结尾The realization struck her like a bolt of lightning, warming the corners of her heart and sweeping away the doubts and fears that had kept her distant. In their place, a quiet sense of connection to the class and a flicker of hope for the days ahead began to grow, encouraging her to face her new life with a smile.