<details style="color:gray;background-color: #f8f8f8;padding: 8px;border-radius: 4px;" open> <summary> Thinking... </summary>**Examining Task Structure**
I'm currently focused on the first task: analyzing the prompt and creating an outline. It's a key first step. There are three components to this: understanding the prompt, identifying key concepts, and then outlining the response. I'm strategizing how to best approach the outlined response.
**Revising Task Decomposition**
I've revised the task breakdown. The addition of the "Core Vocabulary" component has changed the scope. "Core Vocabulary" now appears to be part of the initial "Analyze and Outline" phase. I'm focusing on the integration of these elements to ensure a comprehensive and pedagogically sound approach to the response.
**Refining Task Sequencing**
I'm now clarifying the task breakdown. I've pinpointed inconsistencies in the provided information. Specifically, the placement of the "Core Vocabulary" component in relation to Task 1 is ambiguous. I'm investigating how the template's structure impacts the flow and structure of the output. I'm focusing on the integration of these elements to ensure a comprehensive and pedagogically sound approach to the response.
**Integrating Template Elements**
I'm now integrating the template structure with the user's instructions. The template's "1.2 信息提取" aligns with the need for a preliminary information breakdown, while "1.3 对1.2中信息整合优化" supports the overall structure. I'm focusing on effectively generating these sections to build a comprehensive outline. I'm considering how best to present information that covers the needs of the template and aligns with best Chinese educational practices.
**Analyzing Template Integration**
I'm now focusing on integrating the template's structure with the user's requirements and best Chinese educational practices. I've mapped the provided instructions to the template's sections, resolving some initial discrepancies. I'm focusing on "1.2 信息提取," "1.3 对1.2中信息整合优化," and "1.5 布局谋篇" to ensure a comprehensive and pedagogically sound outline structure that meets the needs of Chinese education standards.
**Synthesizing Task Requirements**
I'm now in the process of synthesizing the comprehensive requirements. I've mapped the provided instructions to the template's structure, clarifying the relationship between user instructions and template sections. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", "核心词汇", and curriculum links to build a comprehensive outline. I'm also considering the integration of tasks and how the output will meet the demands of a high-quality Chinese education response.
**Prioritizing Structure & Content**
I'm now focusing on Task 1, step 1, using the English writing task. I will analyze the genre, structure, language style, person, and tense with justifications. My focus will be on the template's structure as per the user's instructions. I'll need to generate sections like `1.1文体格式结构` and `1.2 信息提取`. I will need to make sure to follow the constraints.
**Prioritizing Task Requirements**
I'm now focusing on synthesizing the task requirements and aligning the instructions to the template's structure. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", and "核心词汇" to build a comprehensive outline. I'm also ensuring the final output meets the needs of a Chinese educational response. I've re-mapped the user's requested steps onto the template's format.
**Finalizing Task Mapping**
I'm now integrating the analysis into the template's structure. I've re-mapped the user's "审题 列提纲" steps to "第一步：审题列提纲". I'll generate the required "1.1", "1.2", and "1.3" sections. I'm focusing on ensuring clarity within the "1.5 布局谋篇" outlines. I'll also address the "维度四：核心词汇" after mapping the curriculum. The "任务二" is clearly defined and structured after "任务一".
**Mapping Information & Structures**
I've clarified the mapping of the user's requirements to the template's sections, especially the structure. The "审题分析" aligns with `1.1 文体格式结构`, while "信息提取" encompasses `1.2 信息提取`, focusing on key data points and hidden implications. I'll need to generate `1.2` which will feed into the overall essay structure in `1.3对1.2中信息整合优化`. This step is crucial for laying the groundwork for the outline. The user's input clearly defined the scope of the essay: Describe the survey results, simple comments, and your suggestions. I'm prioritizing these aspects to ensure that the final output aligns with the user's intentions.
**Structuring Content Analysis**
I'm synthesizing the requirements for a model response, now clarifying the relationships between the user's input and the template structure. I'm prioritizing the "第一步" prompt analysis to ensure that the "信息提取" and "布局谋篇" sections are comprehensive and pedagogically sound. I'll utilize the data presented to ensure that the content is accurate and structured to meet the goals outlined in the curriculum standards.
I've analyzed the prompt and the provided data, and I've developed the initial outline, including a mapping to the template's structure. I'm focusing on "信息提取" for data integration and "布局谋篇" for outlining. I'm also ensuring a balanced approach, with a detailed description of the survey results and appropriate comments and suggestions.
**Mapping Out the Structure**
My current focus is on building a comprehensive outline. I'm actively mapping the user's requirements to the template's structure. I've broken down the prompt, identified key information, and am now structuring the essay's content. I'm aiming for a logical and pedagogically sound approach, adhering to the specified word count and structure.
I've now finalized the structure and content for Task 1 and I'm ready to begin Task 2. I've re-reviewed all the information, including my own notes, the template structure, and the user's instructions. I'm focusing on the first step: writing the model essay based on my outline. I'm focusing on writing, structuring, and ensuring this response meets the needs of the template and the curriculum.
I've finalized Task 1's outline, aligning the structure with the user's instructions and the template's requirements. I'm prioritizing the "布局谋篇" component to ensure the essay's organization. I've re-reviewed the data, and plan to generate the 3-paragraph response. I'm focusing on "信息提取" for data integration and "1.5 布局谋篇" for outlining. I've prepared all requirements for "任务一", now it's time to begin Task 2.
I've finalized Task 1's detailed structure and content, focusing on the template's requirements. I'm ready to begin Task 2 by crafting a comprehensive model essay based on this established outline and the user's instructions.
**Refining Outline Generation**
I'm now in the process of refining the outline generation. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", and "维度四：核心词汇" to build a solid structure that can generate a comprehensive response. I'm also ensuring the essay structure is balanced and aligns with educational best practices.
I'm focusing on the first step: **Constructing the Model Outline**. I've successfully mapped the user's instructions to the template's "第一步：审题列提纲," focusing on creating the foundational sections. I'm now developing the outlines for each paragraph, ensuring information extraction and the initial integration of key vocabulary. I'm incorporating annotations to clarify grammatical structures. I'm prioritizing the paragraph structures for the model essay.
**Constructing Essay Structure**
I've outlined the essay, mapping the user's input to the template. I'm focusing on "信息提取" to build a solid foundation, followed by crafting the sections "布局谋篇" and "核心词汇" for clarity and conciseness. I'll construct a structured model essay.
**Analyzing the Task Structure**
I've outlined the task's components, focusing on the mapping of the prompt's steps to the template. I'm now developing the outline structure for the model essay, emphasizing information extraction, structuring the data and mapping out the main components of the model essay. I'm ready to move onto the "布局谋篇" component for the next task.
I've now finalized the structure and content for Task 1 and I'm ready to begin Task 2. I'm focusing on the first step: writing the model essay based on my outline. I've broken down each part of the essay. I'm using each decomposition idea and example sentences for clarity, building the basis for a coherent response. I'm also focusing on key vocabulary, sentence construction, and cohesion.
I've now finalized the structure and content for Task 1 and I'm ready to begin Task 2. I've re-reviewed all the information, including my own notes, the template structure, and the user's instructions. I'm focusing on the first step: writing the model essay based on my outline. I'm focusing on writing, structuring, and ensuring this response meets the needs of the template and the curriculum.
**Developing Outline & Content**
I've completed a comprehensive analysis of the prompt, meticulously outlining the essay's structure. I'm focusing on "信息提取" to build a logical framework, including example sentences. My focus is on the "布局谋篇" component for a coherent and pedagogically sound essay, ready to build a compelling response.
**Analyzing Task Requirements**
I've reviewed the requirements for a model essay and crafted a detailed plan. I'm prioritizing the "布局谋篇" component and ensuring a comprehensive outline is in place. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", and "核心词汇" to build a solid base for Task 2.
**Analyzing Survey Insights**
I've crafted an outline and core vocabulary for a model essay on healthy eating, mapping the user's instructions and integrating them with the template's structure. I'm focusing on a 3-paragraph structure with clear information extraction and curriculum links. The outline provides clear directions and is ready for the creation of a model essay.
I've outlined and analyzed the prompt's instructions. I'm focusing on "信息提取" and "布局谋篇" to create a structured outline that maps the user's instructions to the template's sections, and meets the requirements of a Chinese education response. I'm prioritizing the structure, which is also the final structure for Task 1 and the beginning of Task 2.
I'm currently focused on constructing the model outline. I'm actively integrating the user's instructions and the template's structure to ensure a clear and comprehensive outline. Specifically, I'm working on "信息提取" for data integration, "布局谋篇" for outlining, and "核心词汇" for vocabulary. I'm aiming for a pedagogically sound structure, with a concise and well-structured response to the survey.
**Analyzing Article Composition**
I've crafted an initial outline for Task 1 and composed a model essay for Task 2. I'm focusing on "信息提取" for data presentation and "布局谋篇" to ensure a balanced structure, incorporating detailed comments and suggestions, which will be further refined to meet the target word count.
**Constructing Essay Content**
I'm now in the process of building the model essay. I've successfully crafted the introductory paragraph. Next, I'll integrate the survey results and comments in the body. I'm focusing on the integration of data and commentary and the alignment with the structure, to make sure this meets the educational standards.
I've finalized the structure and content, focusing on the template and user needs. I've re-mapped instructions to template sections, prioritizing clarity. I'm building a concise, informative essay, incorporating both data and curriculum links for the final product. I'm ready to begin Task 2.
I've analyzed the survey prompt and its accompanying data. I'm focusing on "信息提取" for synthesizing key details, with the goal of constructing a robust model for both Task 1 and Task 2. I'm aiming for balanced sentence structures, vocabulary, and cohesion, ready to refine the model.
I've finalized the structure and content, focusing on the template and user needs. I've re-mapped instructions to template sections, prioritizing clarity. I'm building a concise, informative essay, incorporating both data and curriculum links for the final product. I'm ready to begin Task 2.
I've completed the initial analysis, generated the structure, and refined the essay content. I'm focusing on "信息提取" for data presentation and the integration of curriculum themes. I've built a model essay and an upgraded version with detailed annotations and mappings. I'm prioritizing overall quality and content precision.
**Analyzing Response Construction**
I've mapped the instructions to the template. I'll provide an organized, structured response, meeting both the template's requirements and the user's educational needs. I will now integrate the survey, comments, and suggestions. I'll then construct the model essay for Task 2.
I've now finalized all the steps of Task 1, including the initial structure, mapping, and the creation of example sentences. I'm focusing on "信息提取," "布局谋篇," and core vocabulary integration. I'm ready to move into the model essay phase.
**Structuring Initial Response**
I've refined the approach to Task 1, ensuring alignment with the template's structure. I'm focusing on "信息提取" and integrating the curriculum theme to build the outline. I'll construct a 3-paragraph model essay.
**Synthesizing Initial Output**
I'm now integrating the analysis and outputs into a structured format to create a comprehensive response, building on the initial analysis of the prompt, the template's sections, and the user's instructions. I'll include the structured outline, examples, the graded model essay, and vocabulary elements. I'll adhere to the template's structure to meet the educational standards.
I'm synthesizing the requirements for a high-quality response. I'm building a structured outline, providing example sentences with detailed annotations and creating a model essay for Task 2. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", and "核心词汇" to build a comprehensive outline. I'm ready to begin Task 2 and start constructing the model essay.
**Refining Model Essay Generation**
I'm now integrating the example sentences for the model essay. I'm focusing on "信息提取" by re-writing and refining the example sentence translations. This has informed the model essay, the outline, and the core vocabulary. I'm focusing on generating the complete final output.
I've crafted an initial draft of the model essay, integrating the annotated example sentences from the paragraph outlines. I'm working to make sure it aligns with the template. I'm also ensuring the essay is structured, that the format is accurate, and it conforms to the target word count and CEFR guidelines.
**Generating Model Response**
I'm now implementing the template structure to generate a comprehensive model response. I've broken the task into generating and organizing the required sections, including information extraction and outlining. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", and "核心词汇" to create a cohesive output that addresses all requirements. I'm working to integrate the example and graded version of the essays to ensure a pedagogically sound response.
**Generating Comprehensive Output**
I'm now generating all the required sections in the precise template format. I've compiled the initial analysis, generated example sentences, and crafted model essays. I'm focusing on "信息提取", "布局谋篇", and "核心词汇" to create a complete and educationally sound submission.
**Structuring Article Content**
I'm now generating all the required sections in the specified template format. I've re-reviewed the initial analysis, generating example sentences, and constructing model essays. I'm prioritizing "信息提取" for data integration, "布局谋篇" for outlining, and "核心词汇" to build a thorough structure. I'm also preparing for the integration of the annotations into the overall template structure.
**Generating Comprehensive Output**
I'm now generating all sections in the template format for a complete submission, integrating the analysis, generating example sentences, crafting model essays, and mapping to the curriculum. My focus is on ensuring a clear and structured response that effectively presents the survey data and offers actionable suggestions.
**Structuring Survey Response**
I've begun assembling all required components, meticulously following the provided structure. This includes analyzing the prompt, extracting core information, generating example sentences with annotations, crafting the model essay, and adhering to the prescribed grade and CEFR constraints. I'm now integrating the results into the template format for a complete submission.
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**Constructing Task Structure**
I'm now building the final output. I'm focusing on "信息提取" for data integration, "布局谋篇" for outlining, and vocabulary control. The plan is to create a complete and educationally sound submission, including the model essay. I'm actively working on aligning the example sentences and grading with the template's structure to achieve the final output.
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好的，作为一名精通《普通高中英语课程标准（2020修订版）》与《中国高考评价体系》的阅卷专家，我将严格按照您的要求，对给定的写作任务进行分析并提供相应的参考范文。词汇难度将严格遵循CSE4级（高中阶段），CEFR B1-B2范围，《课标》3500词范围，朗文高频前5000词，以及蓝思值600L-1050L的动态校准。
**第一步：审题列提纲**
**1.1 文体格式结构→** 本文为一篇给学校英语报社的投稿（短文），属于图表信息阐述及建议类应用文。基本结构应包含：引言（点明写作背景和目的）、主体（描述图表信息、进行评论）、结语（提出建议并总结）。
**语言风格→** 半正式，信息描述部分要求客观准确，评论和建议部分可以适当融入个人观点，语言清晰简明。
**人称→** 描述图表数据时采用第三人称；发表评论和建议时可使用第一人称（如“I think/believe”, “We should”）。
**时态→** 描述图表数据（现状）及健康饮食建议（一般事实）时，主要使用一般现在时；提出建议时，可使用一般现在时或情态动词（如 "should", "can", "it is advisable to"）。
*（理由：图表数据反映的是当前情况或普遍建议，故用一般现在时。评论是基于当前情况的看法，建议是面向未来的行动，因此也适用一般现在时或情态动词。）*
**1.2 信息提取**
**1.21 核心信息：**
1. 讨论主题："Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose"。
2. 写作任务：为学校英语报写一篇短文投稿。
3. 内容要点：
* 描述调查结果。
* 进行简单评论。
* 提出个人建议。
4. 图表数据对比（我校学生 vs 健康饮食建议）：
* 谷物类：学生20% vs 建议33% （学生摄入不足）
* 水果蔬菜：学生18% vs 建议33% （学生摄入严重不足）
* 肉类、鱼类及其替代品：学生15% vs 建议14% （学生摄入与建议接近，略高）
* 含脂肪或糖的食物：学生45% vs 建议9% （学生摄入严重超标）
**1.22 隐藏信息：**
1. 学校对学生的饮食健康状况表示关注，并发起了相关讨论。
2. 学生当前的饮食结构与健康饮食建议存在显著差距，尤其是在水果蔬菜摄入过少和高脂高糖食物摄入过多的问题上。
3. 文章旨在引导学生认识到健康饮食的重要性，并鼓励他们做出更明智的食物选择。
4. 提出的建议应具有针对性和可行性，能够帮助学生改善饮食习惯。
**1.3 对1.2中信息整合优化：**
本文旨在回应学校英语报社关于“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”的讨论，通过分析一项关于我校学生饮食习惯的调查结果，揭示当前饮食结构中存在的问题，并就如何改善饮食习惯提出具体建议，以期提高同学们的健康饮食意识。
**文章结构为：**
* **第一段（引言）：** 提及学校报社的讨论主题，引出本文将分析的饮食调查及其目的。
* **第二段（主体）：** 详细描述调查结果中学生饮食与健康建议的关键差异（如谷物、果蔬摄入不足，高脂高糖食物摄入过多），并就此现象及其可能带来的影响进行简要评论。
* **第三段（结语）：** 针对调查发现的问题，提出具体的、可操作的饮食建议，并呼应讨论主题，强调自主选择健康饮食的重要性。
**1.5 布局谋篇**
**第一段：（背景交代+引出话题）**
* 背景交代：呼应学校英语报社的“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”讨论。
* 过渡衔接：说明本文将基于一项饮食调查结果展开讨论。
* **→话题词汇：** discussion, examine, habits, survey, reflect, dietary patterns, data, school newspaper, theme
* **示例1→** Our school's ongoing discussion, "**Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose**," **prompts** us **to carefully examine** our daily eating habits, ***especially*** **considering** the findings of a recent dietary survey. (*信息分解方法: 背景描述法; 拓展思路: 直接点出学校活动并自然过渡到调查; 核心语法结构: 现在分词短语 (considering the findings...)作状语, 不定式作宾语补足语 (prompts us to examine); 汉语翻译: 我校正在进行的“自主选择，健康饮食”讨论促使我们仔细审视日常的饮食习惯，特别是考虑到最近一项饮食调查的结果。*)
* **示例2→** **In response to** the school newspaper's call for articles on "Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose," this piece **aims to shed light on** our students' current dietary landscape **as revealed by** a recent survey. (*信息分解方法: 背景描述法; 拓展思路: 表明写作意图是响应号召并揭示现状; 核心语法结构: 介词短语表目的 (In response to...), 动词不定式表目的 (aims to shed light on...), 过去分词短语作后置定语 (as revealed by...); 汉语翻译: 为响应校报关于“自主选择，健康饮食”的征稿，本文旨在揭示最近一项调查所显示的本校学生的饮食现状。*)
* **示例3→** The timely "Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose" initiative **offers a valuable opportunity to reflect on** our food choices, and a recent survey **provides insightful data** for this discussion. (*信息分解方法: 背景描述法; 拓展思路: 肯定活动意义并引出数据支持; 核心语法结构: 名词短语作主语 (The timely...initiative), 动词短语 (offers an opportunity to reflect on, provides insightful data); 汉语翻译: “自主选择，健康饮食”这一适时的倡议为我们反思食物选择提供了一个宝贵的机会，而最近的一项调查则为此次讨论提供了富有洞察力的数据。*)
**第二段：（描述调查结果+简单评论）**
* 分点叙述：清晰呈现调查数据中各大类食物的摄入比例与健康建议的对比，特别是差异显著的方面。
* 评论：点出饮食结构的不平衡及其潜在的健康影响。
* **→话题词汇：** survey, reveals, shows, consume, intake, compared to, recommended, grains, fruits, vegetables, fatty, sugary, significantly, less, more, imbalance, health, concern.
* **示例1→** The survey **highlights** a **significant disparity**: students' consumption of fruits and vegetables **stands at** a mere 18%, **lagging far behind** the 33% recommendation, ***while*** their intake of fatty and sugary foods **is alarmingly high** at 45%, against the advised 9%. (*信息分解方法: 对比分解法; 拓展思路: 突出最显著的两个对比数据，使用鲜明词汇; 核心语法结构: while引导对比状语从句, 核心动词 (highlights, stands at, lagging far behind, is); 汉语翻译: 调查突出显示了一个显著差异：学生的水果蔬菜摄入量仅为18%，远低于33%的建议值，而他们对高脂高糖食物的摄入量则高达惊人的45%，与建议的9%形成对比。*)
* **示例2→** **It is noteworthy that** while consumption of meat and fish (15%) **aligns closely with** the 14% guideline, our intake of essential grains (20%) and vital fruits/vegetables (18%) **is considerably lower than** the suggested 33% for both, **indicating** a potential nutritional imbalance. (*信息分解方法: 对比分解法 + 具体内容描述法; 拓展思路: 先扬后抑，全面展示数据并指出问题; 核心语法结构: "It is noteworthy that..."主语从句, 现在分词作结果状语 (indicating...); 汉语翻译: 值得注意的是，尽管肉类和鱼类的摄入量（15%）与14%的指导标准基本一致，但我们对主要谷物（20%）及重要果蔬（18%）的摄入均远低于两者33%的建议量，这表明可能存在营养失衡。*)
* **示例3→** The data **paints a concerning picture**: we **are overconsuming** foods high in fat and sugar (45% vs. 9%) ***and simultaneously*** **underconsuming** crucial items like grains (20% vs. 33%) and produce (18% vs. 33%), a pattern **that could pose risks to** our long-term well-being. (*信息分解方法: 具体内容描述法 + 意义功能展望法; 拓展思路: 用生动的描述引出数据，并警示潜在风险; 核心语法结构: and simultaneously连接并列的现在进行时态, that引导的定语从句; 汉语翻译: 数据描绘了一幅令人担忧的画面：我们正大量食用高脂肪高糖食物（45% vs 9%），同时严重低估了谷物（20% vs 33%）和果蔬（18% vs 33%）等关键食物的摄入，这种模式可能对我们的长期健康构成风险。*)
**第三段：（提出建议+总结呼应主题）**
* 归纳建议：针对上述问题，提出1-2条具体的、学生可以操作的建议。
* 总结升华：呼应“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”的主题，强调个人选择的重要性。
* **→话题词汇：** suggestions, recommend, advise, crucial, important, choose, opt for, increase, reduce, develop, habits, mindful, balanced diet.
* **示例1→** **To address this**, we **should consciously strive to increase** our daily intake of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, ***while*** **making a concerted effort to limit** sugary drinks and processed snacks. (*信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法; 拓展思路: 针对主要问题提出“增”和“减”两方面的具体建议; 核心语法结构: 不定式作目的状语 (To address this), while分词短语表伴随 (while making...); 汉语翻译: 为解决这一问题，我们应有意识地努力增加每日水果、蔬菜和全谷物的摄入量，同时齐心协力限制含糖饮料和加工零食的摄入。*)
* **示例2→** **It is therefore essential that** we become more **mindful of** our food choices, **opting for** healthier alternatives and **remembering that** "to eat is to choose" for a better self. (*信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法 + 意义功能展望法; 拓展思路: 强调意识的转变和行动的选择，并点回主题; 核心语法结构: "It is essential that..." sb (should) do 结构, 现在分词作伴随状语 (opting for...), that引导宾语从句; 汉语翻译: 因此，我们必须更加留意自己的食物选择，挑选更健康的替代品，并牢记“食即选择”，为了更好的自己。*)
* **示例3→** By **making small, consistent changes**, such as **swapping** a sugary snack for a piece of fruit or **choosing** whole grains over refined ones, we **can gradually cultivate** healthier eating habits and **truly embody** the spirit of "Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose." (*信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法 + 意义功能展望法; 拓展思路: 强调小改变的累积效应，并升华主题精神; 核心语法结构: By doing...方式状语, such as列举, and连接并列谓语 (can gradually cultivate... and truly embody...); 汉语翻译: 通过做出一些细小而持续的改变，例如用一份水果代替含糖零食，或选择全谷物而非精制谷物，我们可以逐渐培养更健康的饮食习惯，并真正体现“自主选择，健康饮食”的精神。*)
**1.4 新课标主题语境→**人与自我 (Person and Self) → **主题群1.1 生活与学习** → **子主题1.12 健康的生活方式，积极的生活态度** → 具体子话题：健康饮食习惯，营养知识，做出健康选择。
**→教材链接：**
* **人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册 Unit 3 Food and Culture → HEALTHY EATING** (健康饮食、要素、减糖、均衡饮食、慢速进食)
* **人教版高中英语选择性必修第三册 Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle → HABITS FOR A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE** (议论文：健康生活方式、坏习惯、好习惯、建议策略) 及 **Two letters** (应用文/信件：学生经历、饮食、锻炼、娱乐、改善生活)
**维度四：核心英文话题词汇**
**Words (单词):**
1. **survey** (n.) (调查)
2. **diet** (n.) (饮食)
3. **habit** (n.) (习惯)
4. **consume** (v.) (消耗，食用)
5. **recommend** (v.) (推荐，建议)
6. **balance** (n.) (平衡)
7. **nutrition** (n.) (营养)
8. **reduce** (v.) (减少)
9. **increase** (v.) (增加)
10. **choice** (n.) (选择)
**Phrases (短语):**
1. **healthy eating** (健康饮食)
2. **eating habits** (饮食习惯)
3. **survey results** (调查结果)
4. **fruits and vegetables** (水果和蔬菜)
5. **fatty foods** (高脂肪食物)
6. **sugary drinks** (含糖饮料)
7. **a balanced diet** (均衡饮食)
8. **make choices** (做出选择)
9. **cut down on** (减少)
10. **compared to/with** (与……相比)
**任务二：打造并升级参考范文**
**第一步：打造参考范文**
Our school's "Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose" discussion **invites us to examine** our eating habits, ***especially*** **in light of** a recent survey. (20 words)
*(段落功能：背景交代+引出话题; 信息分解方法：背景描述法)*
The survey **reveals** some **concerning trends**. We **consume far less** grains (20%) and fruits and vegetables (18%) than the recommended 33% for each. ***Conversely***, our intake of foods high in fat or sugar **is alarmingly high** at 45%, **compared to** the suggested 9%. Meat and fish consumption (15%) **is relatively close** to the 14% advice. This dietary imbalance **could affect** our health. (73 words)
*(段落功能：描述调查结果+简单评论; 信息分解方法：对比分解法 + 具体内容描述法)*
***Therefore***, **it's crucial to make healthier choices**. **Let’s try to increase** fresh produce and **reduce** sugary snacks, **embracing** the power to "Eat to Choose." (24 words)
*(段落功能：提出建议+总结呼应主题; 信息分解方法：具体列举+描述法 + 意义功能展望法)*
*(Total: 117 words | CSE Level: 4 | Estimated CEFR: B1-B2 | Estimated Lexile: 900L-1000L)*
**第二步：满分范文升级**
The school’s "Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose" discussion **prompts a reflection on** our dietary patterns, ***particularly*** **illuminated by** recent survey data.
The findings **highlight** some **notable disparities**. Our intake of grains (20%) and fruits/vegetables (18%) **falls significantly short of** the advised 33%. ***In stark contrast***, consumption of items **laden with** fat or sugar **skyrockets to** an excessive 45%, versus the 9% guideline. Pleasingly, meat and fish intake (15%) **is largely in line with** the 14% recommendation. Such an imbalanced diet **may negatively impact** our well-being.
***Consequently***, **adopting wiser dietary selections is paramount**. We **should consciously boost** our consumption of fresh produce and **simultaneously minimize** sugary treats, ***thereby*** **truly embodying** the "Eat to Choose" spirit.
*(Total: 120 words | CSE Level: 4 | Estimated CEFR: B1+-B2 | Estimated Lexile: 950L-1050L)*
**批注 (Annotations for the upgraded version):**
* **高级语法结构 (Advanced Grammar Structures):**
* 动名词短语作主语 (Gerund phrases as subjects: e.g., `adopting wiser dietary selections`)
* 分词短语的运用 (Use of participial phrases: e.g., `illuminated by`, `laden with`)
* 更强效的动词及精准的形容词/副词 (Stronger verbs and precise adjectives/adverbs: e.g., `prompts a reflection`, `notable disparities`, `falls significantly short of`, `skyrockets to`, `paramount`, `consciously boost`, `simultaneously minimize`)
* 多样化的衔接手段 (Varied cohesive devices: e.g., `particularly`, `In stark contrast`, `Consequently`, `thereby`)
* **信息分解方式 (Information Decomposition Methods used in the essay):**
* 背景描述法 (Background Description Method - 用于引言部分，交代写作背景)
* 对比分解法 (Comparative Decomposition Method - 用于主体段，对比学生饮食与健康建议的差异)
* 具体内容描述法 (Specific Content Description Method - 用于主体段，详述数据并评论饮食失衡现象)
* 意义功能展望法 (Meaning/Function Outlook Method - 用于主体段评论健康影响，及结论段强调选择对健康的积极意义并呼应主题)
* 具体列举+描述法 (Specific Enumeration + Description Method - 用于结论段，提出具体的饮食改进建议)