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I'm focused on embodying the role of a Chinese examination expert. I'm actively aligning with the user's three-task structure. This will ensure my response meets their specific criteria for the invitation letter.
**Clarifying the Framework**
I am now delving into the prompt analysis, beginning with a focus on its structural and stylistic nuances. I am following the `<篇章逻辑结构框架评分参考>` to ensure the letter aligns perfectly with the standard invitation letter format. My attention is currently on the email format, informal style, and appropriate tense usage for describing the event. I aim to integrate relevant textbook materials to strengthen my analysis.
**Developing the Structure**
My current focus is crafting the outline based on the user's three-task structure. I've analyzed the prompt to align with the framework: background + invitation → details → response request. The email format with an informal tone and future tense for event details is being considered. I'm focusing on integrating "When HAMLET meets PEKING OPERA" for context. I am also currently working on the structure of the invitation itself to ensure that the letter provides all the necessary information, in the proper order.
**Expanding the Foundation**
I'm now integrating the provided prompt information into the outline, focusing on the email format. I'm leveraging the `<篇章逻辑结构框架评分参考>` to structure the letter: from background and invitation, to details, and finally, a response request. The emphasis remains on aligning with an informal tone and the use of the future tense for event descriptions. My focus is now on integrating relevant details that explain the "When HAMLET meets PEKING OPERA" event to make the invitation clear and engaging.
**Outlining the Invitation**
I'm now fully immersed in the prompt and have carefully dissected its elements. I've pinpointed the key aspects: email format, informal tone, and future tense for event details. My focus now is on constructing a compelling outline, leveraging the `<篇章逻辑结构框架评分参考>` and my analysis of "When HAMLET meets PEKING OPERA." I am structuring my email into three paragraphs and choosing from a list of methods provided to describe the event. The plan is to ensure that the invitation clearly, and persuasively informs the recipient of the event details.
**Crafting the Core**
I am now structuring the first paragraph of the invitation letter, focusing on the event's background and extending a cordial invitation to Jim. I'm employing the 'Background Description Method' to state the email's purpose. I'm also considering integrating textbook links and utilizing active voice to construct compelling sentences that highlight Jim's interest in Chinese culture. I'm working to make the opening sentence of the email engaging and persuasive.
**Developing the First Draft**
I'm currently crafting the first draft of the invitation letter, focusing on the three-paragraph structure and the required email format. I've begun with the first paragraph, aiming to provide context and extend the invitation to Jim using the background description method. My focus is on crafting a compelling introduction that highlights the event and piques Jim's interest in Chinese culture.
**Structuring the First Paragraph**
I'm currently crafting the first paragraph of the invitation letter. I'm focusing on providing context for the event, ensuring a cordial invitation is extended to Jim. I've chosen the "Background Description Method" to clearly state the email's purpose. I'm also considering integrating textbook links and employing the active voice to make the sentences more compelling and to emphasize Jim's interest in Chinese culture. My aim is a persuasive and engaging opening.
**Optimizing the Draft**
Now, I'm deep into the task of refining the invitation letter's first draft, sentence by sentence, and aiming for increased effectiveness. I'm focusing on strengthening each sentence with improved wording and cohesion, as well as incorporating more complex structures. I will present a few examples to showcase the improved letter.
**Revising and Refining**
I've been meticulously refining the invitation letter, focusing on the opening paragraph and integrating textbook content. My aim is to make it more engaging for Jim, emphasizing the cultural exchange aspect and piquing his interest in Chinese Opera. I'm focusing on the first sentences of the first paragraph of my email.
**Formulating the First Paragraph**
I'm now integrating the prompt information into the opening paragraph, focusing on building a welcoming structure. The aim is to generate a robust email opening. I'm focusing on strengthening the sentences by optimizing the wording and incorporating more complex structures. The objective is to make the invitation more enticing for the recipient.
**Analyzing the Structure**
Now, I'm analyzing the prompt and structuring the information into an organized framework. The focus is on incorporating the event details. I'm choosing the most suitable methods for creating a compelling invitation, ensuring the format aligns with email conventions. I'm focusing on the `<篇章逻辑结构框架评分参考>` to structure the letter in three paragraphs.
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好的，阅卷专家已就位。我将严格遵循您的指令，对该高考英语写作任务进行专业、细致的分析和产出。
### **第一步：审题列提纲**
1.1 **审题分析**
* **文体格式结构** → 邀请信（邮件），遵循<篇章逻辑结构框架评分参考>1.22号结构：活动背景+发出邀请 → 邀请原因+具体事项 → 回复要求/期待。
* **语言风格** → 非正式、热情友好（写给同学）。
* **人称** → 第一人称（I, we）和第二人称（you）。
* **时态** → 使用一般现在时交代背景（Our school is holding...），一般将来时或be scheduled for结构告知活动安排（will be held / is scheduled for），并使用现在时或将来时表达邀请和期待（I'm writing to invite... / I hope you can come）。
1.2 **新课标主题语境**
* 人与社会（文学、艺术与体育）→ 子话题：戏剧、影视、音乐等领域的概况及其发展 → **教材链接**：外研版必修二第四单元 `Stage and screen` → `When HAMLET meets PEKING OPERA` (文章探讨了莎士比亚戏剧与京剧的融合，与“戏曲进校园”及邀请交换生的跨文化交流情境高度相关)。
1.3 **信息提取**
* **1.3.1 核心信息**：
1. 身份：红星中学高三学生李华，活动负责人。
2. 收件人：英国交换生Jim。
3. 事件：举办“戏曲进校园”系列活动。
4. 写作目的：邀请Jim参加。
5. 要点：活动时间、地点、内容、邀请理由。
* **1.3.2 隐藏信息**：
1. Jim作为英国交换生，可能对中国戏曲不了解但有好奇心，这是邀请他的绝佳理由（文化体验）。
2. 活动内容不应只是“观看”，还应包含互动体验环节（如试穿戏服、学习基本动作、了解脸谱含义等），这样更能吸引外国学生。
3. 邀请理由应突出活动的独特性和对Jim的特殊意义（a unique cultural feast, a great opportunity for cultural immersion）。
1.4 **信息整合优化**
* 文章结构将遵循邀请信的经典三段式：
* **开篇**：直接点明事由，发出诚挚邀请。
* **主体**：清晰陈述活动的时间、地点；通过具体列举法和意义展望法分解活动内容（如欣赏表演、了解脸谱、试穿戏服），并阐述这对他而言为何是一次不容错过的文化体验，以此作为邀请理由。
* **结尾**：表达期待，并礼貌地请求对方回复。
1.5 **布局谋篇**
* **第一段: (背景交代+发出邀请)**
* **思路**: 提及正在举办的“戏曲进校园”活动，并直接、热情地向Jim发出邀请。
* **话题词汇**: cordially invite, cultural exchange, fascinating, captivating.
* **示例1** → **Knowing your keen interest** in Chinese culture, I'm writing to **cordially invite** you to our "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" event. (*现在分词作状语+表明写作目的，经验、惯例引入法；翻译→了解到你对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣，我写信是为了诚挚地邀请你参加我校的“戏曲进校园”活动。*)
* **示例2** → I'm thrilled to **extend a personal invitation to you for** our school's fascinating event, "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus", **which I believe you will find truly captivating**. (*extend an invitation to sb for sth结构+非限制性定语从句，背景描述法；翻译→我怀着激动的心情，就我校一场名为“戏曲进校园”的精彩活动，向您发出个人邀请，我相信您会觉得它非常迷人。*)
* **第二段: (主体段：具体事项+邀请理由)**
* **思路**: 先告知具体的时间地点。然后运用“具体列举+描述法”和“意义功能展望法”详细介绍活动内容，并点明其文化价值，以此强化邀请理由。
* **话题词汇**: be scheduled for, auditorium, appreciate classic excerpts, hands-on experience, symbolic meanings, stunning costumes, immerse oneself in, authentic art form.
* **示例1** → The event **is scheduled for** this Saturday morning at 9:30 in the school auditorium, **where** you can not only **appreciate classic excerpts** by professional artists but also **have a hands-on experience** trying on the exquisite costumes. (*被动语态+where引导的非限制性定语从句+not only...but also...平行结构，具体列举+描述法；翻译→活动定于本周六上午9:30在学校礼堂举行，在那里你不仅能欣赏到专业艺术家的经典选段表演，还能亲身体验试穿精美戏服。*)
* **示例2** → **What makes it a can't-miss opportunity is that** you'll get to **witness** professional performances, **learn** the stories behind the painted faces, and even **try** some basic movements, **offering you a fantastic chance to immerse yourself in** our profound culture. (*what引导的主语从句+平行的非谓语动词+现在分词作结果状语，意义功能展望法；翻译→这场活动之所以不容错过，是因为你将有机会亲眼见证专业表演、了解脸谱背后的故事，甚至尝试一些基本功，这为你提供了一个沉浸式体验我们深厚文化的绝佳机会。*)
* **第三段: (结语段：表达期待+请求回复)**
* **思路**: 再次表达希望对方参加的强烈愿望，并请求其告知是否能出席。
* **话题词汇**: unique cultural feast, honored, look forward to.
* **示例1** → I **sincerely hope** you can join us for this unique cultural feast and **truly believe** it will be an unforgettable experience for you. (*宾语从句叠加，意义功能展望法；翻译→我真心希望你能加入我们，共享这场独特的文化盛宴，并坚信这对你来说将是一次难忘的经历。*)
* **示例2** → **We would be honored** to have you with us. **Please let me know** if you can make it at your earliest convenience. (*虚拟语气表达郑重+祈使句提出请求，惯例引入法；翻译→您若能光临，我们将倍感荣幸。如果可以，请尽早告知我您能否前来。*)
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### **任务二：打造并升级参考范文**
#### **第一步：打造参考范文**
Dear Jim,
[S1] ***I'm writing to*** **cordially invite** you to our school's "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" event. [S2] ***Since*** you are interested in Chinese culture, I **thought** this would be a great chance for you. (段落功能: 活动背景+发出邀请; 信息分解方法: 背景描述法)
[S3] The event ***is scheduled for*** this Saturday morning at 9:30 in the school auditorium. [S4] You will not only **watch** classic performances by professional artists ***but also*** **get a chance to** learn about facial masks. [S5] You can even **try on** the beautiful costumes. **It’s a fantastic way to experience** an authentic Chinese art form. (段落功能: 邀请原因+具体事项; 信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法)
[S6] I **sincerely hope** you can join us. [S7] ***Please*** let me know if you are available. (段落功能: 回复要求/期待; 信息分解方法: 惯例引入法)
Yours,
Li Hua
#### **第二步：优化升级**
* **@S1 →** `I'm writing to cordially invite you to our school's "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" event.` 表达正确但略显平淡。
* **优化1** → I’m **so excited to invite** you to our school's upcoming "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" event. (*用so excited to do sth. 结构增强语气，更显热情*)
* **优化2** → I’m thrilled to **extend a personal invitation to you for** our school’s special event, “Chinese Opera Enters the Campus”. (*使用 extend an invitation for 句型，使邀请更正式、更具吸引力*)
* **@S2 →** `Since you are interested in Chinese culture, I thought this would be a great chance for you.` 句式简单，逻辑关系可以更紧密。
* **优化1** → **Knowing your keen interest** in Chinese culture, I believe **it's an opportunity you don't want to miss**. (*用现在分词作状语，使句子更简洁，同时使用定语从句，表达更地道*)
* **优化2** → **Given your fascination with** our culture, I believe this event, **which offers a glimpse into traditional Chinese art**, will be particularly captivating for you. (*使用Given...介词短语引导原因，并插入非限制性定语从句补充信息，使句子结构更丰富*)
* **@S3 →** `The event is scheduled for this Saturday morning at 9:30 in the school auditorium.` 信息准确，但可增加衔接词。
* **优化1** → **Just to let you know,** the event is scheduled for 9:30 this Saturday morning in the school auditorium. (*增加口语化衔接语，使行文更流畅自然*)
* **优化2** → **Mark your calendar:** the event will take place at 9:30 this Saturday morning in our school auditorium. (*使用“Mark your calendar”这一地道表达，生动活泼，吸引读者注意*)
* **@S4 & S5 →** `You will not only watch classic performances... but also get a chance to learn... You can even try on...` 两个句子可以合并，内容可以更丰富，更有层次。
* **优化1** → You'll not only **appreciate classic excerpts** but also **get hands-on experience**, like **learning** about the symbolic meanings of facial masks and **trying on** the stunning costumes. (*将watch升级为appreciate，chance to learn升级为get hands-on experience，并用分词并列结构丰富细节*)
* **优化2** → The agenda is packed **with fascinating activities**: you can **appreciate** classic excerpts, **discover** the secrets behind the symbolic facial masks, and even **have a go at** wearing the stunning costumes. (*使用冒号引出并列的活动，动词选择更生动，have a go at用法地道*)
* **@S6 →** `I sincerely hope you can join us.` 表达得体，但可以更进一步表达活动的价值。
* **优化1** → I truly believe **it will be an unforgettable cultural experience** for you. (*强调活动的价值和独特性，增强说服力*)
* **优化2** → **What a rare opportunity it will be to immerse yourself in** this profound art form! (*使用感叹句，将陈述变为赞叹，极大地增强了感染力*)
* **@S7 →** `Please let me know if you are available.` 语句简洁，但可以更正式、诚恳。
* **优化1** → **I’m really looking forward to your reply.** (*使用分词结构，表达期待之情*)
* **优化2** → We **would be honored if you could join us.** I’m greatly looking forward to your company. (*使用虚拟语气显得更加郑重和有礼，company一词比reply更侧重于盼望对方的陪伴*)
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### **任务三：满分范文升级**
Dear Jim,
***I'm thrilled to*** **extend a personal invitation to you for** our "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" series, an event **which I believe you, with your keen interest in different cultures, will find captivating**. (段落功能: 背景交代+发出邀请; 信息分解方法: 背景描述法+同类内容延展法)
***The activity is scheduled for*** 9:30 this Saturday morning in the school auditorium. ***There,*** you can **not only appreciate** classic excerpts performed by professional artists **but also gain hands-on experience**, **from learning** the symbolism of the vibrant facial masks **to trying on** the stunning costumes yourself. **What a rare opportunity it will be to immerse yourself in** this profound art form! (段落功能: 邀请原因+具体事项; 信息分解方法: 具体列举+描述法)
***We would be honored*** **if you could join us** for this cultural feast. ***I'm greatly*** looking forward to your reply. (段落功能: 回复要求/期待; 信息分解方法: 惯例引入法)
Yours,
Li Hua