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2024华中师大一附中11月月考-读后续写-热心人路遇车祸，热心救助显风采

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2025/4/20

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【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。斯蒂芬妮是东皮奥里亚高中的新生，她刚刚上完第二天的课，心里充满了兴奋。她决定骑自行车出去兜风。但是，骑车时，她突然摔倒了，一根尖锐的金属管刺穿了她的右腿，割断了她的动脉，全身剧烈疼痛。在附近从事木工工作的库普里斯听到声音，出来发现了受伤的斯蒂芬妮，立即对她进行急救，并想法让她保持清醒，然后拨打了119。多亏库普里斯的快速行动，斯蒂芬妮活了下来。【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“‘我该怎么办？’库普里斯的脑子里回响着。”可知，第一段可描写库普里斯对斯蒂芬妮进行急救，并想法让她保持清醒，然后拨打119求救。 ②由第二段首句内容“幸运的是，斯蒂芬妮睁开了眼睛。”可知，第二段可描写斯蒂芬妮醒来后的情况，并对库普里斯表示感谢以及最后得救。 2. 续写线索：发现受伤的斯蒂芬妮——进行急救——拨打119——救护车到来——得救——感谢 3. 词汇激活行为类 ①脱下：take off/remove ②系上：tie/attach ③轻拍：pat/clap 情绪类 ①痛苦：in pain/painful ②感谢：gratitude/appreciation/thanks 【点睛】【高分句型1】While waiting for the ambulance, he stayed by her side, constantly checking her pulse and trying to comfort her. (运用了while引导的状语从句的省略) 【高分句型2】He knew that he had to keep her conscious, so he gently patted her face and talked to her constantly, though he was not sure if she could hear him. (运用了that引导的宾语从句、though引导的让步状语从句和if引导的宾语从句)

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。 Stephanie, a freshman at East Peoria High School, had just finished her second day of classes, filled with excitement. Eager to enjoy the warm afternoon, she decided to take her bicycle out for a ride. The wind rushed past her, refreshing her spirit as she sped down a hill. However, in a cruel twist of fate, disaster struck. She suddenly lost control of her bike. The world around her seemed to slow down as she felt the bike slam into the ground. In a horrifying moment, she realized that one of the bike’s handle grips (车把) was missing, which left a sharp, exposed metal pipe that pierced her right leg, severed her artery (动脉) and flooded her body with intense pain. Panic set in as she lay on the ground, her mind racing. A severed artery can cause rapid blood loss, leading to unconsciousness and death within minutes. Stephanie felt herself slipping away, believing she wouldn’t survive. But in the midst of her anguish, help was on the way. Kupris, who had been working on a woodworking project nearby, heard the chaos, dropped his tools and rushed outside. His heart raced as he dashed along a block, driven by a desperate desire to assist. Following a trail of blood that painted a distinct contrast against the pavement, he felt a surge of fear and concern. When he finally reached the scene, the sight that came into view was terribly horrible. There lay Stephanie on the ground, her face pale and her body twisted in pain, severely injured. “The whole thing looked impossible, couldn’t be real,” Kupris recalled later, still shaking with fright. He saw a severe wound on her upper leg. Blood was pouring out of the cut. He called her but there was still no response. Panic surged through him as he realized he needed to act quickly — every second counted. 注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 “What should I do?” echoed in Kupris’s head. _______________________________________ Luckily, Stephanie opened her eyes. __________________________

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参考范文一： “What should I do?” echoed in Kupris' head. His hands shook as he ripped off his shirt, quickly folding it into a makeshift bandage. With trembling fingers, he pressed it firmly against Stephanie's wound, hoping to slow the blood loss. “Stay with me!” he called out, his voice wavering. Despite his fear, Kupris forced himself to think clearly. Spotting his belt,he swiftly wrapped it around her upper leg as a tourniquet, pulling it tight. Sweat dripped down his forehead, but he didn't stop. Stephanie stirred slightly, her eyelids fluttering open. Her faint voice whispered, "What... happened?" Relief surged through Kupris, but he knew the fight wasn't over. Luckily, Stephanie opened her eyes. Just as Kupris began to fear the worst, the sound of an ambulance pierced the air. Within moments,paramedics surrounded them, working swiftly to stabilize Stephanie. Kupris stepped back, watching as they carried her into the ambulance. Exhaustion weighed on him, but a sense of pride filled his chest. Weeks later, Stephanie and her family visited him to express their gratitude. "You saved my life, " she said, tears in her eyes. Kupris smiled, replying softly, "You reminded me what it means to truly care. 参考范文二： “What should I do?” echoed in Kupris’s head. He quickly took off his shirt and tied it tightly around Stephanie’s leg above the wound, trying to slow down the blood loss as much as possible. He knew that he had to keep her conscious, so he gently patted her face and talked to her constantly, though he was not sure if she could hear him. Then he called 911, clearly stating their location and Stephanie’s condition. While waiting for the ambulance, he stayed by her side, constantly checking her pulse and trying to comfort her. Luckily, Stephanie opened her eyes. She was still in great pain but felt a little relieved seeing Kupris beside her. Kupris told her that the ambulance was on its way and that she would be okay. Stephanie managed to whisper a thank-you. When the ambulance arrived, Kupris helped the paramedics load her onto the stretcher. At the hospital, Stephanie underwent immediate surgery. Thanks to Kupris’s quick actions, she survived. After that, Stephanie often visited Kupris to express her gratitude for saving her life.