第一步：审题列提纲
1.1 文体格式结构→电子邮件（与交换生商议创意）；语言风格→友好、协商、清晰；人称→第一人称（李华）、第二人称（Jim）；时态→一般现在时（描述想法）、将来时（计划）、现在完成时（已有的思考）。
理由：邮件是与Jim沟通创意，需要友好协商的语气；描述创意设计和询问建议主要使用现在时态，提及未来计划可用将来时，已有的思考和准备可用现在完成时。
1.2 布局谋篇
参考应用文体“建议信”的变体（此处为创意分享与建议征询，核心是讨论与合作），结合邮件格式。
篇章逻辑结构框架：问候+提及共同任务（创意大赛）→分享个人创意（核心内容）→征求对方建议+表达期待。
**第一段:（背景交代+过渡）**
* 功能：问候，点明写信背景（创意大赛），引出分享创意的目的。
* 信息分解：
* 提及比赛：‘Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture’ creative competition.
* 合作关系：We are teaming up.
* 写信目的：Share my initial idea.
* 信息分解方法示例：
1. *(背景描述法 + 目的明确; 核心语法: 现在进行时，不定式作目的状语)* "**I'm really excited** about teaming up for the ‘Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture’ creative competition, and **I've been brainstorming** an idea **I'd like to share** with you." (*我对我们为“科技与中国传统文化”创意大赛组队感到非常兴奋，我一直在构思一个想和你分享的点子。*)
2. *(具体内容描述法 + 引入话题; 核心语法: 介词短语，现在完成时)* "**Regarding** our entry for the ‘Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture’ contest, I’ve **come up with** a concept that **I think has potential**, and I’m eager to get your thoughts." (*关于我们参加“科技与中国传统文化”比赛的作品，我想到了一个我认为有潜力的概念，我很想听听你的想法。*)
3. *(同类内容延展法 (合作背景下) + 强调目的; 核心语法: with引导的伴随状语，动名词作宾语)* "**With** our participation in the ‘Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture’ competition approaching, I wanted **to discuss sharing** a creative design I've been developing." (*随着我们参加“科技与中国传统文化”比赛的临近，我想讨论分享一个我一直在构思的创意设计。*)
**第二段:（主体段：分享创意设计）**
* 功能：详细阐述自己的创意设计，说明如何将科技与中国传统文化结合。
* 信息分解（以“AR体验传统节日”为例）：
* 核心创意：Develop an Augmented Reality (AR) experience.
* 传统文化元素：e.g., Spring Festival customs (dumpling making, couplets, lion dance).
* 科技应用：AR technology on smartphones/tablets.
* 结合方式：Users point their devices at real-world objects to see virtual cultural elements and information.
* 预期效果：Interactive, educational, engaging, innovative.
* 信息分解方法示例：
1. *(具体内容描述法 + 意义功能展望法; 核心语法: 不定式作目的状语，现在分词作结果状语)* "My idea **is to create** an **interactive Augmented Reality (AR) application** that **allows** users **to experience** elements of the Spring Festival. **Imagine** pointing a smartphone at a blank table and **seeing** a virtual plate of dumplings appear, **complete with** an interactive guide on how to make them." (*我的想法是创建一个互动的增强现实（AR）应用程序，让用户体验春节元素。想象一下，将智能手机对准一张空桌子，就能看到一盘虚拟饺子出现，还附带制作饺子的互动指南。*)
2. *(分拆内容叙述法 + 具体列举; 核心语法: 方式状语从句，并列结构)* "We **could focus on** how technology, **specifically AR**, **can bring** traditional Chinese calligraphy to life. Users **could learn** to write characters with a stylus on a tablet, and the AR component **could then project** their writing onto a virtual lantern or scroll, **showcasing** its beauty **while also providing** historical context." (*我们可以专注于科技，特别是AR技术，如何让中国传统书法焕发生机。用户可以用触控笔在平板电脑上学习写汉字，然后AR组件可以将他们的书法投影到虚拟灯笼或卷轴上，展示其美的同时提供历史背景。*)
3. *(同类内容延展法 (文化与科技的融合) + 目的明确; 核心语法: 동名词作主语，定语从句)* "**Blending** modern tech with ancient culture, my concept **involves designing** a virtual tour of a historic site, like the Forbidden City, **using** VR technology. This **would offer** an **immersive experience that highlights** architectural details and historical stories **which are often missed** in a physical visit." (*将现代科技与古老文化相融合，我的概念是利用VR技术设计一个历史遗迹的虚拟游览，比如故宫。这将提供一种沉浸式体验，突出那些在实体参观中常常被忽略的建筑细节和历史故事。*)
**第三段:（结尾段：询问建议+期待）**
* 功能：明确征求Jim的建议，表达合作的期待。
* 信息分解：
* 询问建议：What do you think? Any suggestions? Your input would be valuable.
* 期待合作/回复：Look forward to hearing from you.
* 信息分解方法示例：
1. *(直接询问 + 表达重视; 核心语法: 疑问句，情态动词)* "**What are your initial thoughts** on this concept? **I'd be grateful for** any suggestions or improvements you might have, as your perspective **would be incredibly valuable**." (*你对这个概念的初步想法是什么？如果你有任何建议或改进，我将非常感激，因为你的观点将非常宝贵。*)
2. *(反向描述法 (暗示需要他人建议来完善) + 期待; 核心语法: It would be great if..., 现在分词作伴随状语)* "**It would be great if** you could share your opinion, or perhaps suggest ways **we could refine** this idea further. **Looking forward to brainstorming** with you soon!" (*如果你能分享你的看法，或者建议我们如何进一步完善这个想法，那就太好了。期待很快与你一起进行头脑风暴！*)
3. *(经验、惯例引入法 (合作中征求意见的惯例) + 强调合作; 核心语法: feel free to, 祈使句)* "**Please feel free to tell me** honestly what you think, and **let me know if** you have any alternative ideas or enhancements. Your creative input **is crucial** for our success." (*请尽管坦诚地告诉我你的想法，如果你有任何其他点子或改进建议，也请告诉我。你的创意对我们的成功至关重要。*)
1.3 新课标主题语境→人与社会（科学与技术）→子话题：科技发展与信息技术创新 (也关联“历史社会与文化”→“物质与非物质文化遗产”的展示与传承) →教材链接：**外研XB1U4 Meeting the muse** (艺术灵感、艺术展览、艺术与科技) 或 **人教XB1U2 Looking into The Future** (科技改变、观点文章) 或 **人教B2U1 Cultural Heritage** (PROMOTING CULTURE THROUGH DIGITAL IMAGES 数码影像技术、莫高窟文化遗产、国际合作、文化遗产保护)。
1.4 核心英文话题词汇
单词：
1. **competition** (竞赛)
2. **creative** (有创意的)
3. **technology** (技术)
4. **traditional** (传统的)
5. **culture** (文化)
6. **design** (设计)
7. **suggestion** (建议)
8. **concept** (概念)
9. **interactive** (互动的)
10. **virtual** (虚拟的)
短语：
1. **team up** (组队)
2. **come up with** (想出)
3. **share with** (与...分享)
4. **ask for** (请求)
5. **focus on** (专注于)
6. **bring to life** (使...生动起来)
7. **look forward to** (期待)
8. **keen to hear** (渴望听到)
9. **in this way** (通过这种方式)
10. **Augmented Reality (AR)** (增强现实)
### 任务二：打造并升级参考范文
## 第一步：打造参考范文
Dear Jim,
Hope you're doing well. I'm so **excited** about our **teaming up** for the ‘Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture’ **creative competition**, and I've **brainstormed** an initial **concept** I'd love to **share with** you. (段落功能: 问候+交代背景+引出话题；信息分解方法: 背景描述法)
My idea **revolves around creating** an **interactive Augmented Reality (AR) experience** showcasing traditional Chinese paper-cutting art. Users could **point** their smartphones at a plain piece of paper and **see intricate** paper-cut designs **come to life** virtually, **perhaps even learning** the stories behind different patterns. *This way*, we can **blend** ancient artistry with modern tech **effectively**. (段落功能: 分享具体创意设计；信息分解方法: 具体内容描述法 + 意义功能展望法)
What do you think of this? I'm **really keen to hear** your **suggestions** or any other ideas you might have. Your input **would be invaluable**! (段落功能: 征求建议+表达期待；信息分解方法: 直接询问+表达重视)
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(116 words)
## 第二步：满分范文升级
Dear Jim,
Hope you're well. **Regarding** our participation in the ‘Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture’ **creative competition**, I've **developed** an initial **concept** I’m **eager to share** for our team. (段落功能: 问候+交代背景+引出话题；信息分解方法: 背景描述法)
My vision **involves crafting** a **dynamic Augmented Reality (AR) application** to **revitalize** the art of traditional Chinese shadow puppetry. **Imagine** users **employing** their devices to **interact with** virtual puppets, **unveiling** classic tales through this **engaging** digital medium. *This approach*, I believe, **seamlessly merges** our rich heritage with cutting-edge **innovation**. (段落功能: 分享具体创意设计；信息分解方法: 具体内容描述法 + 意义功能展望法；*升级：使用更高级词汇如craft, revitalize, employ, unveil, engaging, seamlessly merges, innovation；句式更丰富，如imagine引导的祈使句*)
I'd **greatly value** your perspective on this. Do you have any **refinements** or alternative ideas? Your insights **would be truly beneficial**. (段落功能: 征求建议+表达期待；信息分解方法: 直接询问+表达重视；*升级：使用更正式和强调的词汇如greatly value, refinements, insights, truly beneficial*)
Looking forward to collaborating.
Yours,
Li Hua
(118 words)
(*批注：范文运用了现在分词作伴随状语 (unveiling classic tales)、不定式作目的状语 (to revitalize the art)、imagine引导的祈使句增加生动性、以及表述建议和期待的得体句式。信息分解上，第一段采用背景描述法引出话题；第二段采用具体内容描述法和意义功能展望法阐述创意，将科技(AR)与传统文化(皮影戏)的结合点清晰呈现；第三段则直接询问以征求建议。词汇选择注重准确性和场景适宜性，如crafting, revitalize, unveiling, engaging, seamlessly merges, refinements, insights等。*)